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2024-08-15 11:20

Not a bad fanfic. The only drawbacks I noticed are: The hero is too MC, OP. Lives in his own. imagination, fantasy (the surrounding reality is secondary in importance). What suffers from is the credibility of the development of the world, characters. The power of the character increases faster than the plot moves. The further, the more components are added to this mess. Moreover, his power overshadows his own personality (which looks secondary at best). I read parts 8, chapter 6 by title.

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