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DetachedDreamer
DetachedDreamerLv149mth
2024-07-09 13:19

Great story until everything just went to hell on bear island. there is enough chaos to be had to not have to force such a scenario. I know its fanfiction but try and use a bit of logic. it really hurt the story and don't know if its worth reading on. Also the God involved really hurts the story as well. trying to inject extra drama never ends well. perfect example. sad cuz the story had a lot of potential. maybe it'll somehow correct itself but I doubt it. I'll revise my review if so.

Westeros : Echoes of Warframe

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DetachedDreamer
DetachedDreamerLv14

Ya the R.O.B. intervenes again, Jesus christ. imagine having so little imagination you need a GOD to be the catalyst for change. Jesus. how fast this story went to hell.

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could be better but what kills it for me is the meddling R.O.B . might be worse for me then those troll systems

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It has potential. I like Warframe and I liked the story so.

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