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A_wall1206
A_wall1206Lv157mth
2024-09-19 21:06

complete and utter shit first off the title lies its not harry potter just a guy who inhabits the body of harry at the start then they through together several worlds but dont bother to work towards going back to harrys world to finish the prophecy. god so much shit stacked together is still shit.

Harry's Multiversal Journey

SenseiCaffeine
4.5
91 Chs

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AstrosBR
AstrosBRLv3

finish reading up to chapter 91 and then come comment, if you don't have the patience to understand the story avoid giving criticism, you're just being an idiot

7mth
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Crytach
CrytachLv14

... may want to back up your words here bro, the author as of now, stopped posting 2 months ago... I will agree with the flames a bit, after being chucked out of ASOIAF the story went downhill for me, probably because he was nerfed to shit ... nobody likes new game+ unless you actually play it.

AstrosBR:finish reading up to chapter 91 and then come comment, if you don't have the patience to understand the story avoid giving criticism, you're just being an idiot
5mth
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Marc_4072
Marc_4072Lv3

A Genocide / Mass Enslavement right at the start of the Story? Bold. I like it! I need to know more!

10mth

Amataratsul
AmataratsulLv15

Honestly starts ok, then it becomes convoluted really quick, one world then another then another with no real progression to be seen. It would have been better had the author split everything up more

9mth
Hikikomori0X
Hikikomori0XLv5

Sorry for my bad English, I'm using the translator. The story was good until it entered the world of FMA and the author's terrible choice to practically nerf the system and throw the MC into the world of Magus. Now for me this arc is very boring, but that's my opinion and I'm not trying to influence anyone's opinion. Now I'm waiting for this arc to end and hoping the next one will be better. With that, a good job to the author. . . .

9mth
Rebecca_9601
Rebecca_9601Lv1

Really nice premise. Harry Potter always a nice Setup. Currently Daily Updates is also really good. Chapter Lengths is a bit above average in my Opinion. Quality is also one of the decent ones. Can't wait for more.

10mth
cosmicRider
cosmicRiderLv4

everything was great until the author decided to add more and more other anime or books like I get it but still right now it's becoming a mess 😮‍💨 I miss the part where this was my favourite fanfic untill recent chapters

9mth
TranquilShield
TranquilShieldLv5

Needs some Editing, lots of little mistakes like calling Legilimancy, Legitimacy or Obliviate, Oblivion but otherwise it's a pretty interesting Oc posses Harry gamer story

10mth
Player0Kun
Player0KunLv4

Nice Story so far, quality is good, i like its concept. Can't wait for more chapters to be uploaded and try to make chapters long, they are not too short but they are also not big.

11mth
Mordred_6172
Mordred_6172Lv1

Nice Story so far can't wait to see where it goes! Quality is decent, a bit above the average Webnovel Fanfiction, but not the best I ever read. Please more soon!

11mth
birtek89
birtek89Lv3

Last arc is unnecessary and ruined the continuity of the story. Nerfed the MC and of course, more than 30 boring chapters that don't contribute positively to the story. Since the author doesn't care about the readers, it's not a story for those who are following along. If you are going to read it, it is better to wait until it is finished, as the author does not take the reader's opinion into account and also does not respond to their comments. Either way, it's not for me. As it is, it has lost the essence of the beginning. And it seems like there will be no end of universes embedded in the story. I think the right thing to do would be to set a maximum of 5 or 6 universes that are very in tune with HP and GOT and work with that, developing the characters that are brought to GOT well. As it stands, it doesn't even make sense to develop a kingdom in GOT.

7mth
Ryuukage
RyuukageLv5

Read up to chapter 55. Starts great, then author nerfs MC for no reason at all. Skipps a few chapters and ultimately, decided, its getting boring so I will be officially dropping this, or not, who knows, the next arc will be the turning point if I should drop or not

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