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2024-09-10 21:45

Last arc is unnecessary and ruined the continuity of the story. Nerfed the MC and of course, more than 30 boring chapters that don't contribute positively to the story. Since the author doesn't care about the readers, it's not a story for those who are following along. If you are going to read it, it is better to wait until it is finished, as the author does not take the reader's opinion into account and also does not respond to their comments. Either way, it's not for me. As it is, it has lost the essence of the beginning. And it seems like there will be no end of universes embedded in the story. I think the right thing to do would be to set a maximum of 5 or 6 universes that are very in tune with HP and GOT and work with that, developing the characters that are brought to GOT well. As it stands, it doesn't even make sense to develop a kingdom in GOT.

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