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2024-08-31 10:32

3/2/3/5/4 After chapter 52, feels like the author got big bribes to do a 180 in the story. Suddenly, system is evil trope followed up with at least 30 chapters of warlock of the magus world shenanigans. Poorly done, since 30+ chaps in a singular world after such speed running of the other worlds he has access to is tedious to read about. Considering everything left behind in his supposed main world. So yeah, feels like author either got bribed or felt like the MC was too OP and decided to just cut it and run in a different direction. Personally I'm going to shove this fic into my 100-0 reading list and sleep on it for a few weeks and then check if MC ever goes back to GoT

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