Review Detail of Dao_of_laziness420 in A Gamer in Dragon Ball

Item: A Gamer in Dragon Ball
Rating: 4.2

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My only gripe is the writing style though I'm hoping that changes because the character interactions are a little stale and a good portion of events are narrated. Good luck and keep it up bro. Reviewed by Chapter 6.

A Gamer in Dragon Ball

Mr_Dumpling

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Mr_DumplingAuthorMr_Dumpling

You make a good point, I will try to improve it. Thanks for being the first one to give a review!

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