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What's the name of this manhua?
My big issues with this book are the character design, the lack of descriptions, and slightly robotic interactions from the MCs side even though it was done for the plot. The idea is great but the execution occasionally makes me feel like I'm reading a summary which makes it hard to relate or care for the character. I put the spoiler bit in to not disuade other readers as the author has shown signs of improvement but I don't have the patience to stick around.
An expected take given the last chapter title
Whats the mtl name?
WQ 5/ SU 5/ SD 4/ CD 3/ WD 4 It's alright; character design and conversations could use some work, but compared to some of the usual slop, it's very good. MC is a bit of a Gary Stu that has little to no actual struggle, which is what I came here to read, with all the threats of Marvel. Sadly those got erased by a genie wish so all the potential conflicts of interest that would make this story entertaining for me are gone.
Read all current chapters and made this review at Chapter 6. There are a couple of issues with the world background, he uses a physical phone when the MC already has a neural link with Kiroshis and could be taking calls directly on his HUD. Overall it's okay, though the speaking seems to be turn-based for some reason. The author is good at setting the tone of the chapters. No obvious AI use beyond grammerly. 3.4
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When does he finally get to cultivate? It's been 32 chapters and still no real progress on that front
Character design is basically non-existent. Chapters are short and read more like a summary from AI. @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@