Review Detail of MrVenerable in Satoru Gojo in Demon Slayer

"Dear Author, I hope you don't mind some constructive feedback on your writing style. Personally, I find it a bit off-putting when characters like Gojo express themselves with such directness, such as 'I think I need to ask the demon slayer guy.' It breaks the flow and immersion for me as a reader. I believe there's room for improvement in how you portray character thoughts and dialogue. Perhaps consider delving deeper into the characters' emotions and motivations, which could enrich the narrative and make their interactions more engaging. I'm sorry if this comes across as harsh, but I feel a three-star rating is fair given these concerns. I hope you take this feedback positively and continue to refine your storytelling skills. Best regards,"