MrVenerable

No way. 🙂‍↔️

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I don't think vhagar has enough stamina to fight vermithor.

Any updates?

crazy author, don't do it again

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You need to understand that his people are not immortal, All beings with limited life span are bound to be greedy to leave a legacy that can span generation to generation so it's bound for them to interfere in westeros not yet but they are bound to. War exists for us humans for a reason you know, to make old people joy and the young to be strong and for power full people to conquer. yet you make him like a living saint.

I don’t like the way he speaks "mortal this, mortal that.” All of your people are mortal, and how can he even claim to be immortal when he has only existed for a hundred years? Maybe he’s just an elf with a long lifespan. Author, you need to change this kind of character. It feels like you’re forcing us to accept that he’s immortal, but we don’t care about his so-called immortality we want action. We want the vibe of A Song of Ice and Fire, where people bleed and die for their beliefs and dreams. This MC feels too passive, with a power that’s stagnant like water in a pond existing with no real purpose. Make him discover things: fire wyrms, mythical creatures in ASOIAF. Create struggles so we can dive deeper into his character. And my final recommendation: make him bleed and struggle. Right now, it feels like he gets everything he wants without any effort, like a child born into privilege who only has to wait because time is on his side.