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TheGodlyFateFox
TheGodlyFateFoxLv147mth
2024-09-09 12:40

I thought I wouldn't like the novel, but I guess wrongly. Though, it was mostly the title that led me to the guess. If I wasn't bored, I would probably skip this novel. Thankfully, I didn't.

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Troubling_Rain21
Troubling_Rain21Lv13

i was going to skip until i saw this comment

TheGodlyFateFox
TheGodlyFateFoxLv14

What do you think of it. The only problem was the grammar, which can be fixed at a later date.

Troubling_Rain21:i was going to skip until i saw this comment
Troubling_Rain21
Troubling_Rain21Lv13

havent read it yet have been partying the last 2 days after i do my homework ill get back to you bud

TheGodlyFateFox:What do you think of it. The only problem was the grammar, which can be fixed at a later date.
TheGodlyFateFox
TheGodlyFateFoxLv14

I hate homework, good luck finishing it.

Troubling_Rain21:havent read it yet have been partying the last 2 days after i do my homework ill get back to you bud
RagingArtPunk
RagingArtPunkAuthor

Same here!

TheGodlyFateFox:I hate homework, good luck finishing it.
Dennis_junior
Dennis_juniorLv14

wait a minute how old r u guys?

TheGodlyFateFox
TheGodlyFateFoxLv14

Well, I'm 15. I'm a freshman.

Dennis_junior:wait a minute how old r u guys?
Kjdaboss
KjdabossLv13

u just give this guy another reader cause I was legit about to skip this

Troubling_Rain21
Troubling_Rain21Lv13

21, college lol

Dennis_junior:wait a minute how old r u guys?
Garry_Johnson_6308
Garry_Johnson_6308Lv4

im fourteen and a freshman and homework does suck

Nero_Okita
Nero_OkitaLv15

Grammar is inconsistent, wrong words , math is inconsistent, MC personality not explained, no background, system not explained properly.

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AusyLust
AusyLustLv12

Ahhhhh, where do I even begin with this one? This story’s got potential—a real banger, easily top 50 on WebNovel. Grammar’s a bit shaky, but hey, it’s good enough that you don’t mind too much. But then… the author starts hittin’ you with clichés, and the MC? Man, he was this close to turnin’ into a full-on wimp. Glad he finally grew a pair and took out those bastards after they killed the servant woman, but that scene? Just one giant, nasty cliché. It’s no wonder the comments went radio silent after that chapter. This coulda been one of the greatest stories on here, but I think the author’s got it twisted. Just ‘cause the MC starts out as a servant doesn’t mean he needs some grand tragedy to justify becoming a villain. Hate to break it to ya, but this guy? He’s no villain. Not even an anti-hero. Dude watches the woman who raised him get forced to stab herself just ‘cause someone ordered it, and what’s he do? Flashes some “killing intent” and just stands there. Like, buddy, you just got her killed. Could’ve seen it coming a mile away—these people tried to pull something shady just a day before, and he’s still clueless. And then he goes on to snag the top spot in the academy did he think they were gonna congratulate him? Makes no sense. I’ll say it again: even the lowliest servants back in the day knew when to break a rule, throw a punch, stand up for somethin’. Sure, some got killed for it, but at least they went out with their heads held high. They didn’t just stand around lookin’ dumb while people they cared about got hurt. It’s time the author dials down on the “tragic backstory” nonsense and gives us an MC who’s got a bit more grit, ‘cause right now, he’s fallin’ flat. If the Mc story is rewritten, take out a the one big cliche, and think of a creative way for him to gain enemies or become the villain you desire, story is easily up there for one of the top reads….good luck to the author

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