First of all, thank you to everyone who has given my story a chance. As a newbie writer, I honestly didn’t expect much, but I’ve been pleasantly surprised by the response from so many readers. I’m writing this as an introduction to my story, and as you might have noticed, it’s pretty fast-paced. Let me explain—I'm more of a reader than a writer. I grew tired of novels that drag things out for chapter after chapter. It’s a valid style of writing, and I understand it works for many people, but it’s just not my preference. In short, this is the kind of novel I would have loved to read myself. Sure, there may be mistakes, and sometimes I trust the reader's intelligence a bit too much by leaving certain things unsaid. But I enjoy writing it this way, and I hope you enjoy reading it too. :) This is a story set in a fantasy world where the standards of life are vastly different. Power is absolute. In such a world, there are certain people who hold different views on that reality. Right now, the story is focused on Damian, but keep in mind that the narrative will feature multiple points of view (POVs). There are several main characters whose perspectives we’ll experience throughout the story. Additionally, there will be one-off or occasional POVs from other characters who aren't the primary focus but are necessary for the narrative—such as Alex or Vidalia. If you're curious about which characters have leading roles, their details, along with artwork, are included in the characters section. It's a nuanced story with many eyebrow-raising topics and themes. In this world, there’s no clear right or wrong. Much of what happens falls into a morally grey area, and the characters' actions and intentions reflect that complexity. That’s just how I imagine a world where god-like power exists among common people would be. I welcome all kinds of feedback, so please feel free to share your thoughts on what’s working and what’s not. As I mentioned, I’m not a professional writer—just someone trying to put his daydreaming fantasies into simple words. Thank you for your support! :)
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darn you author, I already have 7 books on the go on here now I have 8 haven't read any but I loved the synopsis
Is this harem?
No, but it will have romance elements...
is it gonna be single fl for Mc or more than one ?
That's a spoiler...
you mean there is a chance he's gonna get more than one girl ? then why did you say it's no-harem? i knew i shouldn't have started before knowing . anyway good luck on your writing it was very interesting read until where I stopped . if you ever decide to go single fl route in the future please tell me
Not typical harem type but he may have multiple relationships before deciding on the one... Just like normal people...
Is this Boys love or is he marrying into his wife’s family?
Then when his asked is it single fml you should have just yes since you already said it’s no harem. Even if he may have multiple relationships if he decides on one at the end it’s a single fml. He just got confused when you said it was a spoiler.
It's my first time writing, some questions just confuse me and I don't want to be rude...
You're doing great. Keep it up author.
Thank you.. ಥ‿ಥ It's an honor.. Yours is super cool too...😊
U used my 1st and 4th fav fantasy trope.....what kind of devil are you??!! Anyways, how many words in a single chap tho?
first 90 ranges increasingly from 1300 to 1800 after that it's 1k per chap..
Great book, expecting more from you. Keep it up science with magic elements with unique storyline and worldbuilding, this book is a hidden gem. Try to post daily, I can’t wait for more chapters, I will binge read soon
Alrighty thanks ^^
I shall read this Back then
author please read my comment also will you update and keep uploading on royal road since the writathon just came out again.
Hey mate I just want to know if the protagonist in anytime of the story going to be close combat fighter This include sword and spears, et cetera or not? Because my only reason to read this novel is magic , and if he by any chance become a close combat fighter even if he has a mixed class like a magic knight please inform me beforehand because I’m not interested in that. sorry if I came out as harsh, however I had enough getting deceivd by authors that tell me it’s a magician and I discovered it to be barbarian Using the name of a wizard.
