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Paul_Moturi
Paul_MoturiLv146mth
2024-11-03 14:47

Biggest two issues with this Novel is the filler information which makes it difficult to read (we spent about 4 chapters speaking about hunter grading systems???if you cut those chapters out and just leave one where Caera described the same, the remaining chapters are basically useless and contribute nothing to the story), second thing, the protagonist received memories on technique but I don't think it was helpful (what is the difference betweeen him not having memories and having memories?? am having a hard time understanding?)....he still has to go read about mana awakening and train as he would have without the memories.... PS: I am in chapter 47 and 10 more of this I drop it. that 4.4 rating is too kind in my opinion.

The Retired Hero is an Extra

Hardy1j
4.3
287 Chs

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Hardy1j
Hardy1jAuthor

it's just not for you, then, I guess... But it still helps me get a better understanding of why readers drop it, thanks for the honest review!! I'll try to improve and rewrite them

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Hardy1j
Hardy1jAuthor

The Academy Arc has started, so it's the perfect time to leave a mandatory 5 star review!! Okay, I won't be biased and it's 3.5-4 surely. The writing is a bit unique and different from typical novels out here, so I understand if it's not your cup of tea. However, one thing I guarantee is that it'll be a good one despite its shortcomings... Anyways, feel free to ask anything that you feel like and I'll answer without spoilers~ What are you waiting for?? Go read!! Now!!

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Velstad
VelstadLv13

Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.

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SeraphWedd
SeraphWeddLv14

It was a great read! The flow of the narration was new to me, making it an interesting new experience. Definitely would recommend! Great work, author! More chapters~!

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Okojus
OkojusLv4

Easily the best slice of life on the platform

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RayanArcadia
RayanArcadiaLv14

A waste of your time and more importantly money (if you intend to buy privilege chapters like me). The author makes the mc just 99% of each chapter about some random stuff internally and after doing this for 5 chapters whilst also giving out information dumps every line, he remembers to do 1 single action after which he again starts talking to himself about random unneeded, useless, nonsensical stuff. You're better off not reading this garb*ge novel.

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Great_love
Great_loveLv3

Easily one of the best slife of life wn... (hope author finds me a 10/10 baddie😭

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HELL_RAISER_8468
HELL_RAISER_8468Lv4

hello Author-san ..... I just boosted guess who popularity by 19000 just so that i can write in his personality ( Guess who - is that you DADDY ❤️??) ....... Now it say's i can't do that i need 50 fan value the system is rigged I am yelling you!!!!!!! 🤬🤬😭😭😭

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Mike_Bishop_7251
Mike_Bishop_7251Lv10

slow paced story which make it quite tiring waiting for anything substantial to happen. Good luck author but its not for me who likes a much faster well paced story and not ones filled with mediocre thing like a cold shower...who cares? Dropped

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fallen_me
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nice idea for a slice of life. i love drama and this book scream drama. good luck author. i like the world building and mysteries waiting for more...

10mth
Vio_Zero
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If you're looking to read a good story that's interesting you're in the right place. Even though it's still in its early stages I can tell that once the plot really gets going it will be one of the best stories I've read.

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