I was excited to read it, but I already gave up on the first chapter, the MC is just a puppet of a larger entity...........................................................

Why would the MC still act respectful to his father when he knew he could almost get away with anything he do, because of his fathers personality?

Looks good so far(excited to see a new fic rather than more stolen work)

Love the fact of using the old lion as MC and most of all his system is not too OP. Great work

Well I make the first proper comment to this stpry just a few minutes ago but I noticed I pretty much wrote a smallish review and this I believed it was worthy to make it officially a review since this stpry deserve it. I am loving this story and I truly hope the Author won’t drop it and will write many chapter lol… it is rare to find a pre game of thrones and post house of dragon fanfic with no self insert as a Targaryen, stark or John snow the one as young Robert Baratheon or a Lannister for the most part are dropped or of low quality except one that I know of that is also an hp crossover with a lot (too much) of smut. This one as a young tiwyn Lannister is so refreshing and full of potential because of how it is a fact the mc will become Op and he is growing quickly but still the growth is gradual well fleshed out and you are truly building a solid plot with interesting new contents too. There may be a harem pairing but it won’t be the focus for sure and it will be done tastefully and in a fitting way for the plot based on what the author has done till now so I would advise the no harem sect to give it a try too. Keep going me author Keep going

A beautiful story with an even more beautiful beginning. The only issue is the writing quality. It's not bad—in fact, it's good—but I hope it improves even further.

Thank you for this fanfiction. I like the system and the stats. I just wish Tywin would start to meta game his system. Abuse it a little more.Additionally, is there any way to know the stats of others characters?

Story progresses slowly, grammer is fine. Good politics are present.

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Very creative fanfic, one of the best i have read so far, i really looking forvard how it will develop ( author please dont be the kind that can be bullied into writting clishe )