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2024-08-02 03:54

this story is painful lot of things happening in just 2-3 chapters too fast paced. a good potential book ruined i would say

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Astral_Pandemonium
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Yeah, well, this is fair. Fast-paced stories are not for everybody. I have a lot to cover, so fast-paced formatting is necessary...

Kevide
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love your story bro, and it helped me on my self development journey, i also want to become a writer too

Astral_Pandemonium:Yeah, well, this is fair. Fast-paced stories are not for everybody. I have a lot to cover, so fast-paced formatting is necessary...
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