Triskelion

a wholesome plot , i liked how story ends with lots of emotions no rushing of plot like many novels . loved it good going author

the things mc has done in the novel if you look at it objectively he would have been dead within 100 chapter he is only surviving bcz author has given him too much plot armour . i can understand author want him to be op but character of mc is not good when there is strength based society. world building is very good just need work on his character

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i would say story is good its a clan building with many good twist and turns probllems they face and solutions are believable . but here is the problem author gives lot of unnecessary details like he is explaining how much a particular person is powerful its a full chapter long just explaining try us to imagine but i don't like that

this story is painful lot of things happening in just 2-3 chapters too fast paced. a good potential book ruined i would say

did he even find hanna his cousin till now in eastern continent or even rob

i think when the story ends then its only 3-4 months

this story is like good and bad at same time it wastes its small chapters in introduction of a card that is not mc's or his female friends and come on a whole chapter for only introduction of a card and too slow paced not as a story but as time taken to that many changes literally its 1.7k chapter and its only been what 20 days

overall a good novel read but title doesn't suit the novel i have read till ch 230 i would say its power system more than technology but well good read and good background i hope author complete the book not leave it hanging

a good novel the spend time its funny, intense, emotional overall a good read.but i don't know why after around 800 chapter it got a bit boring and during witches arc it got worse so all i can say i enjoyed this novel it could have been my best but i still rate it high.i will start this authors second book i hope i laugh as much as this book did.