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Author_for_funLv45mth
2024-11-25 17:56

The Mc is just plain unlikable, and the constant gay undertones when he's binding men is annoying and honestly not funny, especially when it's constantly repeated. Also, I don't know why there's a romance tag considering that, so far, none of the girls he's with love him, Hancock has given up and basically accepted her fate but she seems not to enjoy his advances and was relieved when he ignored her. And the other is an undercover agent no need to explain.

One Piece : Start As Celestial Dragon And Take Down Hancock

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4.1
127 Chs

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Requien
RequienLv15

I gonna be honest the Story is Bad, it has such an Chinese vibe of One piece that u read out of it, with the young Master Element in it and co. The Figures like Hancock and Kizaru etc. are not themself. I recommend not to waste time on this FF after reading like some chapter ist gets pretty boring

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Uchicha_Remant
Uchicha_RemantAuthor

I am willing to be shameless and give myself good review

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Drigok_Yuri_Is_NTR
Drigok_Yuri_Is_NTRLv15

hey this is my only review or comment ill make on this ff now since I won't be reading it. It was great for a while, his abilities were cool and was looking forwardto what was next, I would say more but I won't cause I was disappointed with yuri in the harem, I even asked the author if there were any before reading it he said no, usually i take it like a grain of salt read abit before i personally see it or not. Sadly this was the case about chapter 50-52, just would've been great to be told so I didn't need to read it 😕

8mth
Bob_Uchiha_XD
Bob_Uchiha_XDLv4

The protagonist is a dragon, that is, the privileged and ruling class of that world (one piece). I like that the protagonist is not Luffy's pet, and that from the beginning Boa Hancock is saved by the protagonist without putting her status at risk. It is a Chinese novel but the story is not bad, it could be better if the paragraphs that are obviously Chinese are edited.

10mth
KeazL_
KeazL_Lv13

RAW : 航海：开局天龙人，拿下汉库克 ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎

11mth
Kono_Timoda
Kono_TimodaLv3

Imma be real with you, it is another trashy translation. but, why I like it is because the Chinese author isn't just making a wish fulfillment story, he's actually trying to flesh out the characters and make a well developed story with proper characters. My one problem is that I would love if the translator could make the story easier to read with a more natural English based syntax (which I can see the TL is getting better at) but I'm not complaining because we have lemons muhahaha Ch30 btw

10mth
unknown_daoist
unknown_daoistLv14

Its the wirst of MTL, just blatantly lying with saying "fixed granmar" - there is no fixed grammar, just your typical MTL what makes it unreadable... probably just to promote his patreon - greedy author

10mth
Melshan
MelshanLv7

Completely pathetic and disappointing, the author/translator has to put the tag Yuri, for people who hate Yuri like me, don't waste your time, Yuri is NTR.

7mth
GodOfReader
GodOfReaderLv13

I'mma be honest, The author is Pedophile, so are the reader of his in patreon. This FF contain alot of pornography involving a children. Please report this shit.

7mth
1stDrunkenImmortal
1stDrunkenImmortalLv14

Just a translation with a bad story.

9mth
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