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hookybobbinLv144mth
2024-11-09 16:46

For me, the story and mc building has been good up to a point. I feel like there is too much unresolved BS holding up the story. meeting his parents, unresolved enemies that just seem to continuely compound instead of being dealt with i.e Richard, Noah, Jagesh, the government/politicians, and the tech industry. IMO it's time for some closure with a few of these things and time to move on to other exploits.

The Tycoon's Odyssey

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Luckyboy13Lv6

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GoodorbadLv4

I love this novel so far I like how the mc is a clam character and takes things step by step and I like how the mc doesn’t do all the tasks that the system gives because it not what he wants which gives a new light to this novel one thing that i like the author to do is not to lock the chapters to early do it when the story starts like between 40 to 60 that’s good because people get to get a rough idea about the story and will like to buy the extra chapters and once lock you can’t changed it which a lot of authors do and people don’t like to pay one author mess up and lock his chapters to 5 which made a lot of people mad and since he can’t change it the novel went down hell. Good luck love it so far just some tip

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Tazz_creativehandsLv14

I’m loving this novel so far. Please continue to update cause I’m invested at this point

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christian_the_pogiLv4

why does the plot the same as the other novel called " technology system in modern day world"? for me its the same progress in this story.

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2 chapters in and I can see a lot of similarities from an Indian movie I know " Ala vaikuntapuram lo "

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TervantasLv15

In the beginning this was a great story, with lots of potential and interesting characters and developments. However in later chapters the author is clearly plagiarizing (Getting a Technology System in Modern Day) after reading 150+ chapters it is severely disappointed that this is how the author ends up writing the story.

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TaxEvaderLv2

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