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tommy_king
tommy_kingLv146mth
2024-06-11 00:30

Pretty simple, I see boardlands fic I give 5 stars

Borderlands: Apex Predator

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4.6
33 Chs

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Harry_Brennan
Harry_BrennanLv12

Basically one of the better bl stories out there (not that there are many still being published) but I really enjoy this and like the fact that bl3 and 1 is acknowledged by the author when most of the time it’s just bl2 or something completely out of canon I have great enthusiasm for the author’s continuing work.

6mth

xHelios
xHeliosLv14

Read up to Ch. 7, not bad, but needs some rework done. -Grammar is only decent, there are quite a few mistakes here and there. -System is sentient, don’t like that. Also the regeneration seems useless, you need to expand on your explanation more, cause the stats just resetting to zero for a better body doesn’t make sense, that’s what END is for by YOUR explanation. -In the beginning, mc bought items in public, and also while training for the army at their location which is stupid as hell. Also talking to himself instead of just thinking, people really need to stop writing this way in regards to systems. -Mc is 34, ends up joining the army so late which is dumb, if you were gonna have him go to pandora that way then why would you have him be 34? Also he seems more like a teenager with the way you’ve written him, what is the point author? No reason at all whatsoever. -Every explanation is pretty bare bones from how he got here and getting the system, to joining the army and currently going on a mission, even the training itself seems so lackluster. Not enough context everywhere in general, but barely ok enough to push the story forward which makes this story weak.

6mth
MiastriSs
MiastriSsLv4

Instant 5 stars for using two of my favorite game franchises in the same fic

6mth
AHAPPYBEAR
AHAPPYBEARLv4

Pure excellence. There’s not enough borderlands fics. I’m excited, please dont drop. Author, you’ve made a friend with this one.

6mth
FinnsRevenge
FinnsRevengeLv4

Borderlands and titanfall? Sounds too good to be true! So i went digging and saw this(pic related) Does this mean you're going to include yuri, NTR, fut*s and other poison? Some content warnings ahead of time would be great, Lord knows that they absolutely shoved bl2 and 3 with 'representation'

6mth
Querubim_
Querubim_Author

hello, author here to pat myself on the back for taking the initiative to start writing. However, I recognize that there's a lot of room for improvement, so I'll be giving myself 5 stars when I've completed it. Peace

6mth
Whadyamean
WhadyameanLv4

An insanely good story that only suffers from being updated rarely, and not having an upload schedule.

4mth
stinkclaw
stinkclawLv14

welcome to the borderlands. please upgrade claptrap he is so sad.

6mth
TheDarkDark
TheDarkDarkLv4

Reveal spoiler

6mth
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