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mercurystarshipLv29mth
2024-06-03 15:38

I'm not sure if the author will keep my review, but here it is: This story felt flat and uninspiring to me. The characters and writing seemed hollow and lacked depth. I've never seen 'The 100', so I don't know the characters, but what I read didn't make me want to keep going. I think the author has potential to improve.

The 100: Sky King

Iseeyou
4.6
42 Chs

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IseeyouAuthor

I 100% agree. It sucks because I want to write what I imagine in my head but Im not an actual writer which makes it hard. But I’m writing other stories and practicing trying to get better and make my stories feel more alive.

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mercurystarshipLv2

Props to you! Keep putting in the hard work. My only suggestion is to read some well-written books and research how to improve writing characters and dialogues. You'll definitely get better over time.

Iseeyou:I 100% agree. It sucks because I want to write what I imagine in my head but Im not an actual writer which makes it hard. But I’m writing other stories and practicing trying to get better and make my stories feel more alive.
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Very fresh and fun to read. Better then most of the 100 fan fics I’ve seen. Can’t wait for more chapters.

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Dao_of_laziness420Lv1

Liking what I'm seeing already. @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@

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DeathELv14

A great read. It's only the second "the 100" fic I've seen. The execution us great, nothing too op for the world. Great potential so try it.

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DaoistRZ8Aw9Lv1

be sure to write , it`s very good]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]

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Insert_HereLv13

The book is really good I just hope the author does not drop this book before 30 chapters like they usually do other than that it is a great book but I can't give it 5 stars at this moment

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Gd_SysLv4

Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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DaoistvezmloLv1

WELL WRITTEN..........................MORE................................................................MORE...............................

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