Not really a full review but just wanted to say this after the first 10 chapters. First and foremost, idk if this is the authors writing style or this is AI generated but there is no way a real human being can sit down and write the same thing over and over again every chapter, like literally every 2 sentences the author writes that the MC is analysing whats around him and talking about the future or opportunities or potential or friendship, like no joke u might read the same sentence a hundred times every chapter, there’s more about the MC speculating in his head than the MC actually doing anything, like I’d say a ratio of 10 to 1…. Also as usual now a days, the MC is a cold blooded assassin who murderd poeple his whole previous life but the moments he transmigates, he’s the nicest most heart warming 4 year old you’ll ever see…
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Sounds like you should write a fanfic to show everyone how it’s supposed to be done 😂😂😂
I was about to say u should stop writing as ur making poeple quit fanfics but u know what, if u enjoy it do whatever u want and don’t take criticism as insults, it’ll make ur life easier kid…
FearTcb:Sounds like you should write a fanfic to show everyone how it’s supposed to be done 😂😂😂
You are real edgy bud, good luck with your novel 😂
Black_Reeper:I was about to say u should stop writing as ur making poeple quit fanfics but u know what, if u enjoy it do whatever u want and don’t take criticism as insults, it’ll make ur life easier kid…
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FearTcb:Sounds like you should write a fanfic to show everyone how it’s supposed to be done 😂😂😂
🤣, go look at the reviewer’s profile. 99% of his comments on every novel he reads are complaints or negativity.
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Yeah, a lot of the times, the ones that speaks the loudest are the ones that shouldn’t speak at all.
FearTcb:🤣, go look at the reviewer’s profile. 99% of his comments on every novel he reads are complaints or negativity.
Lol, he is just unlucky to read bad fics then... all the time... yup, ...
FearTcb:🤣, go look at the reviewer’s profile. 99% of his comments on every novel he reads are complaints or negativity.
Because those stories are either bad, Ai generated, or horrible grammar. If most of those are negativity and complaints, that's a good thing as the authors will learn the problems in their stories.
FearTcb:🤣, go look at the reviewer’s profile. 99% of his comments on every novel he reads are complaints or negativity.
😂
dxdxsavage:Because those stories are either bad, Ai generated, or horrible grammar. If most of those are negativity and complaints, that's a good thing as the authors will learn the problems in their stories.
Black_Reeper:I was about to say u should stop writing as ur making poeple quit fanfics but u know what, if u enjoy it do whatever u want and don’t take criticism as insults, it’ll make ur life easier kid…
I just found your novel and was checking the reviews before reading. Unfortunately you didn't really address this criticism of the constant repeating the reviewer mentioned, and it's a pet peeve I share with novels I read. I'd like to know if he's exaggerating or not, or if his comments have any validity to them. I'm going to read it myself to find out instead of waiting for your reply, but I just wanted to say this first because I believe your response to reviews, both good and bad, can help curious potential readers decide if it's worth the read just as much as the reviews themselves.
FearTcb:Sounds like you should write a fanfic to show everyone how it’s supposed to be done 😂😂😂
I would rather you form your own opinion after reading as I may appear biased seeing as it’s my own novel. However, the one who made the review here has a long history of spreading negativity on the novels they read. Make of that what you will 😂
Quin_Bland:I just found your novel and was checking the reviews before reading. Unfortunately you didn't really address this criticism of the constant repeating the reviewer mentioned, and it's a pet peeve I share with novels I read. I'd like to know if he's exaggerating or not, or if his comments have any validity to them. I'm going to read it myself to find out instead of waiting for your reply, but I just wanted to say this first because I believe your response to reviews, both good and bad, can help curious potential readers decide if it's worth the read just as much as the reviews themselves.
How was it? AI?
Quin_Bland:I just found your novel and was checking the reviews before reading. Unfortunately you didn't really address this criticism of the constant repeating the reviewer mentioned, and it's a pet peeve I share with novels I read. I'd like to know if he's exaggerating or not, or if his comments have any validity to them. I'm going to read it myself to find out instead of waiting for your reply, but I just wanted to say this first because I believe your response to reviews, both good and bad, can help curious potential readers decide if it's worth the read just as much as the reviews themselves.
im guessing you now understand the review was pretty accurate 😂
Quin_Bland:I just found your novel and was checking the reviews before reading. Unfortunately you didn't really address this criticism of the constant repeating the reviewer mentioned, and it's a pet peeve I share with novels I read. I'd like to know if he's exaggerating or not, or if his comments have any validity to them. I'm going to read it myself to find out instead of waiting for your reply, but I just wanted to say this first because I believe your response to reviews, both good and bad, can help curious potential readers decide if it's worth the read just as much as the reviews themselves.
I don't know if it was AI or not. but the review that I was replying to is only slightly exaggerating. the writing style was a bit too much for my liking, so I had to put it down.
ExistentialVoid:How was it? AI?
yeah other than a slight exaggeration on how often it does the repeating thing it still was pretty annoying for me so I had to stop reading it. maybe some other people might find it enjoyable but it's not to my taste
Aaden_:im guessing you now understand the review was pretty accurate 😂
Dude I do write FanFic and honestly your idea is good but having an AI do the writing is dumb. Like seriously it is leaving a strange taste to read your story because it sounds off. Maybe you should read a book or two, and then compare the style with what you’re posting. Anyway good luck and keep going, but I am out. 🖖🏽 I want less AI in the stories I read.
FearTcb:Sounds like you should write a fanfic to show everyone how it’s supposed to be done 😂😂😂
You might as well have not left any comment at all 😂
Ikaru5:Dude I do write FanFic and honestly your idea is good but having an AI do the writing is dumb. Like seriously it is leaving a strange taste to read your story because it sounds off. Maybe you should read a book or two, and then compare the style with what you’re posting. Anyway good luck and keep going, but I am out. 🖖🏽 I want less AI in the stories I read.
