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Salem_Zaed
Salem_ZaedLv37mth
2024-09-13 14:35

It was good until the nine tails rebellion, it became trash not worth reading don’t waste your time, it’s better to watch the original anime

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nemker
nemkerLv4

why are you reading fanfiction then 🤔?

Salem_Zaed
Salem_ZaedLv3

Why are you asking?

nemker:why are you reading fanfiction then 🤔?
nemker
nemkerLv4

you don't give a reason why it's trash and that it's better to watch the original, but the goal of a fanfic is to change an original, so my question 🤔

Salem_Zaed:Why are you asking?
Kinryu
KinryuLv13

I'm confused by your reply. The kyubi incident is almost exactly the same as the original manga. Even with all that power, the MC is still acting like a wimp. He lets Hiruzen order him around. He could've dictated how Naruto's life should be, yet he didn't do anything. He could even tell the truth about the Masked man, yet he didn't. He could use his power to tell them that he didn't need the Kyubi to actually destroy Konoha. Tbh, the story so far is kinda disappointing.

nemker:you don't give a reason why it's trash and that it's better to watch the original, but the goal of a fanfic is to change an original, so my question 🤔
nemker
nemkerLv4

my question was about the comment, not the novel, I already stopped reading this 😉

Kinryu:I'm confused by your reply. The kyubi incident is almost exactly the same as the original manga. Even with all that power, the MC is still acting like a wimp. He lets Hiruzen order him around. He could've dictated how Naruto's life should be, yet he didn't do anything. He could even tell the truth about the Masked man, yet he didn't. He could use his power to tell them that he didn't need the Kyubi to actually destroy Konoha. Tbh, the story so far is kinda disappointing.
SteepWorld2
SteepWorld2Lv4

thanks for the warning, going to stay away from this then...

Kinryu:I'm confused by your reply. The kyubi incident is almost exactly the same as the original manga. Even with all that power, the MC is still acting like a wimp. He lets Hiruzen order him around. He could've dictated how Naruto's life should be, yet he didn't do anything. He could even tell the truth about the Masked man, yet he didn't. He could use his power to tell them that he didn't need the Kyubi to actually destroy Konoha. Tbh, the story so far is kinda disappointing.
DaoistObvious
DaoistObviousLv14

His comment implied that the situation unfolded similarly to the anime, hence why he said that it was better to watch the anime instead. While I do agree that his review needed more details, it is also a fact that you misunderstood him.

nemker:my question was about the comment, not the novel, I already stopped reading this 😉
Salem_Zaed
Salem_ZaedLv3

Well at least you can get the idea, I think mentioning the nine tails incident is enough for a person to get the meaning, it just doesn’t make sense that with his strength things are unfolding the same way, what made me even more upset is that the Mc just agreed to 3rd hokage. Then I dropped the fan-fic I don’t know what happened now though

DaoistObvious:His comment implied that the situation unfolded similarly to the anime, hence why he said that it was better to watch the anime instead. While I do agree that his review needed more details, it is also a fact that you misunderstood him.
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