Salem_Zaed

It’s good, I just dislike onething that is the Mc always somehow will be beaten up by someone stronger, it feel like the author hate Mc and just keep beating him up, and why didn’t the mc already create a regeneration skill, how many time was he beaten up and yet he never created one it seem stupid to me.

It a good novel so far, just wondering wether it’s dropped or what

Are you saying you are dropping it

Why are you asking?

It was good until the nine tails rebellion, it became trash not worth reading don’t waste your time, it’s better to watch the original anime

I like it, there is a few things that didn’t make sense but you can ignore it as it wasn’t relevant, what I dislike the most honestly is Zhou Xue, especially when MC is with her or doing something for her, he is basically a simp for her, it good that she is not there every chapter or I would have thrown the novel away

It was supposed to be Itachi transmigration to Mha but the main character act anything but itachi I think it would have been better if you reincarnated some random person and gave him Itachi abilities, not to mention the forced way of building relationships, I mean how does momo look like sasuke in any way. Even the way he was introduced to the Mha world was stupid and doesn’t make sense, anyway I think the author either rewrites the hole thing or just don’t write it.

Honestly the only thing I like is just that the MC stole the opportunity of the original protagonist, but if you ask is he selfish then No he isn’t the way the Author describes the MC doesn’t match with what he actually is, he isn’t emotionless guy I would say he is very emotional with how fast he fell in love with that Lia girl

Honestly, the biggest flaw in this fanfic is that it’s not consistent, we don’t understand anything it feel like between every chapter there’s a few chapter missing. I think if you rewrite it and give more information, so at least we know the Mc better, man until now I have no idea how old the Mc is.

It’s not bad so far, it’s just that they made Sarutobi too dark and Itachi and Shisui are too stupid or brainwashed. But I can accept that as it does add some fun to the story.