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2024-11-18 00:32

This book is really really good but I do have a couple suggestions so I hope the Author can take a look and consider them... First is Y not get the MCs sister out of the organization she is in and then put her in his as like a high official this way she doesn't have to worry about being in that organization anymore and being attached to it and if the guy doesn't want to let her go then have the MC bring him into the dark Realm and then either kill him or leave him there and if he kills him then carve a message in his chest and send the body to the doorstep of the organization and tell them that if they come after her or her family that they will all be hunted... The second is Y not get the MCs mentor at the college and her to friends that helped the MC in the past to come to his organization and this way he can have at least 2 big families in his organization and this way he knows they wont back stab him and he can give the 3rd girl a research place and let her research whatever she wants this way he can make discoveries and get more funding and resources and have the MC even take control of some secret realms.. like have the MC go in and have a team wait outside this way he can take a look first and see if there is anything extremely valuable to take... And the MC still have to go back to the secret realm that has that tower that he went to when he was in his first year of high school and only maid it to the 4th level and this way he can gain mor things and sell them even though he doest need it... and Y not have the MC look for some resource point that dont have anyone or when its time to get some y not have him gain at least 5 and have them be breeding point, mineral points, healing plant points and any other point that r valuable this way he can have a ton of resources and income coming in right to him self and have the mentor and her friend that has the action house help him out with refining them and selling the things they get because if they enter his organization then it would be way better for him to use them and no one else unless he has the old Qiu or whatever his nam was that has the big croc have him or his nephew/the kid that the MC is working with now join his organization too and this way they can also make it a big thing for there organization to secure poit spots and get income coming from the people that want/need the help and the MC can use all of this to gain connections and see what if he can infiltrate other organizations or big families that r doing illegal things and take them down... And Y not have the book that is in the MCs head be able to take assistances like he did woth his sister but Y not have it so the MC is able to give them all the skills he has already amd when he gets new ones he can give them to him as well but he get a portion of there fragments and the MC is the only one aloud to unlock the new skills and give them out this way he can help the ones he takes as an assistant to become extremely strong and they r able to help him more in the future but they have to be people that he trust 100% and have it so if they go ro talk about they dont remember it but also have the MC be able to feel and have him be able to rip it out of there heads or kill them on the spot if they go to talk but at least have the MC confront the person that tried to talk about and if they admit that they where trying to talk about then have the MC not give them any new skills for awhile and punch them that way so they know they r lagging behind the others that did get the new skill and mabe have the MC be able to be able to look for evolution paths for other beasts and the mini-games for skills and some of the other things that he can only do for his beast this way he can tell the people he trust on what to do to make them stronger this way he can gain more favors and resources from them... And can u please get the MC a girlfriend already... it really sucks that he just stays to himself... maybe have the MC and his mentor get together or the mentors friend that her family owns the auction house especially if they come to his organization but it definitely be great for the 3 women to join his organization to help with everything and the research girl can have access to more things scenes it would in the exotic region and the MC can have teams search the region for things to let her research on and have the results be huge.. way better then where she is before if she joins the organization because they wouldnt let her do what she wants or needs to to get results... but please consider these Ideas because honestly it would be great to have the MCs sister and his mentor and her 2 friends come over to his organization this way it would help him a ton and have more support by at least 2 big families and even if that Qiu or whatever the name is has his nephew or whoever he is join to make a team for resource points would help a ton as well and it would definitely be more exciting to have the MC get a girlfriend already too because it seems like the MC is lonelywhen reading the book!!! I hope it gets taken inro consideration..

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