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Immortal_Goddess
Immortal_GoddessLv1510mth
2024-06-27 15:30

27 JUNE, 2024 REVIEW UNTIL CHAPTER 19‼️ 【CHAPTER COST】: 12 ~ 17 (Until C38) ❌ERRORS‼️ 1. Gender Pronouns 2. Grammar 3. Names 4. Grandpa Ruo is dead but he was named during a reply. This should be MOTHER and not FATHER. Plot is good and well paced so far. Ruan Xuan is funny and smart. A true tabula rasa for human actions, speech and behavior. She could perfectly emulate the humans around her especially when she does her rebuttals. The lines are not cringy. The other adults have not fully displayed their presence yet. It was a worthwhile reading and addition to my library. Give it a try. Just make sure to notify the translator and editor of those errors!🤭

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Immortal_Goddess
Immortal_GoddessLv15

Ruo Xuan is funny in her obsession with eating rabbits and goats. Her way of getting even for being eaten by them when she was still a Fairy Flower.🤭

Immortal_Goddess
Immortal_GoddessLv15

Chapter 42: Still fun to read until C42. Xuanbao is spunky and smart. Able to outwit the villains. 😘

kichullie
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SAVIOR! I rather read MTL than this!

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Roz_Khan_1678
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English title please

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Silver_claw
Silver_clawLv4

great overlord! hey the mighty earthling ... can you shine upon us with the English name of the novel!? I'll be forever grateful to you.. 😂

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anonymousPanda
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English title please

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