I give 5 stars to the author's potential, the first chapters can be tedious, errors in capitalizing names, unrealistically frequent transitions of points of view and flashbacks, which greatly disrupts the pace. These are the downsides that were there, but overall the story is interesting and presented from an unusual angle. Over time, the quality improves, this is felt somewhere from chapter 15. In general, we'll see what happens next, but so far the progress is respectable.
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