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It was great, the mc is thrown into an unusual situation and he gets out as best he can. But at one moment... BOOM... the tree of life, the energy of nature, the devil fruits from the world of One Piece... and you're just like: "What the fuck is going on here?"[img=Shocked]
Um, what about the mission to rescue the sealed girl?
The story has potential, it's interesting to read, but it needs a LOT of editing... the text is repeated, names are changing, pronouns for men are female, for women they are masculine... in general, after editing it will be a pleasure to read
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Dude.. Patrk Fugaku XD
Um, she should be about 30 years old at the moment, not 40, there is about a 10 year difference between her and Nawaki
I understand everything, the story itself is written well, but damn, the pacing of the story is just fucked me up.. 200 chapters, in 200 chapters the hero grew from 5 to 9 years old.. I like that there is no system here and that the hero gains strength through training and efforts, but damn here is too much training chapters, this arc is tooooooooo long... by reducing the number of chapters with trainings, you could save 100 chapters
Change my pitch up Smack my bitch up Change my pitch up Smack my bitch up Pooooooooooow budum budum tsss. ..
the translation sucks, from one time his parents are genin, then his father is jounin, then again his parents are genin.. I’m silent about the distortion of names..
here the quality of the translation is much better, the other translation sucks, often even the names are Chinese