Review Detail of Evillangal389 in Heavenly Great Emperor(Martial peak Fanfic)
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This is my first article and I will try to make as few mistakes as possible. Martial peak state is very large so remind me if I miss something and sometimes I may add something that is not in the story
Heavenly Great Emperor(Martial peak Fanfic)
Evillangal389
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You can use : when they speak so it can be better Like Yang Kai : hello Yang tai : hello It can be easier for readers to understand the flow of the story When you have people in your story screaming you don’t have to say it if you the writing like this : I DON’T WANT . You don’t to have say he screaming and lastly plis use chat gpt for grammar so it can be easier for you and use to understand and you can say to him to just help you whith the grammar and not change anything else
