I'm currently on chapter 8, and I wanted to start by saying that this work is better than I expected, the story is not just smut, it was really interesting and well done, but, as we know, nothing is perfect, so I'm going to mention the things that But they are bothering me in this work. 1 - the characters' way of speaking, using an extensive list of vulgar language, which using the canonical reference doesn't make any sense for Hiruzen to talk like that, but ok, that's the point that honestly bothers me the least. 2 - the protagonist's famous slave seal, honestly what bothers me the most isn't even the seal itself (which isn't even really a slave seal, I think), but the fact that the protagonist accepts it willingly since he already has It's a beautiful story with the loss of freedom, and him simply accepting it in a good way is what irritates me the most, considering that it doesn't make sense given everything he's been through to simply accept this loss of freedom as if it were no big deal. and finally my 3rd and last point - I hope with all my being that the Author doesn't decide to go down some dark paths in terms of smut, because he said to expect some possible gender swap stuff and I'm worried about that ( don't make me abandon this work)
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ok, all the jokes aside, I'll directly inform you that there's only one genderswapโOrochimaru, because of peak artwork and how zesty he acts in ff. As for the seal, i think I made it better. It even affects Tsunade and Kushina more than Kai in a way that those two can sometimes form darker thoughts because how Kai pushes their buttons. However, the seal snaps them out instead. So, there's really no slave seal, but I also don't want to influence you in any manner so you should be the one who decides if they continue reading or not... As for darker smut... there's definitely some kinks involved, including doms from both sides (M/F)
