what I'm looking for from a game making story is the reaction of the players and how the players play it, like the novel "black tech internet cafe system", here the plot is too fast and the lack of player reactions, well... there are player reactions but it's just like "Woah that's great" and a series of other compliments, without discussing how the players play it, most fanfics like this usually include several povs not only from mc but other characters, especially the players, but not here. I've only read a few chapters, I'm not dropping this, but I hope there are improvements in the story. Sorry if it's not understandable, I used translate to write this.
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Yeah I see that, a lot of the good part from these VR game creating novels is the players reactions
