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2024-07-06 10:02

To be honest it’s a good story, but the way the MC is, he doesn’t feel like an endless/abstract. At the start he has the pride of one, but as the story goes on, he seems weak. He’s also getting tricked but a SHIELD agent. It just doesn’t make sense. Other than that it’s good.

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Kojo_Supreme
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Anx for the review. And as for being tricked by a shield agent he ain't, he knows she's a spy. What can she possibly do to him anyways, so that's he is the way he is with her. Other than that thank you for reading

Chaos_Order8
Chaos_Order8Lv5

it's kinda funny if he how has the Omni power of knowledge gets tricked by a mortal

Kojo_Supreme:Anx for the review. And as for being tricked by a shield agent he ain't, he knows she's a spy. What can she possibly do to him anyways, so that's he is the way he is with her. Other than that thank you for reading
dord
dordLv14

it jumps too much around fix that and explain why people meet more would make it better

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