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Daoistinc1G4
Daoistinc1G4Lv1410mth
2024-07-07 23:28

I really don't like it after chapter 2 it melee chained to a whole different character making it well pretty much I lost all interests on it it is now just a bit boring now so yeah that my phone I guess I should put it on spoilers I say that part and you it's pretty much trash to me actually I stopped at "I am trash"chapter

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HopOffMe
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I was just trying to introduce characters as having 10+ chapters of just being in a dungeon can get pretty boring without outside interaction. I can’t even get time to cook…

Mikerules_1200
Mikerules_1200Lv1

bro did you have a stroke?

Daoistinc1G4
Daoistinc1G4Lv14

this is for the guy who have the "lol"frame picture whatever is on the front you try to speak clearly using text to speech and I am way too lazy to proof we did so back at you Becca I meant to say baka there

Daoistinc1G4
Daoistinc1G4Lv14

picture means why I said this is well I honestly don't think it's ready yet I would like mine dungeon if I have one to be very secure especially it's going to my own life or pretty much is so I think that's why PS it has been a while since I read this so sorry if I can't remember the details but the thing I really hate most about is when they're Swiss characters or stretch piles per se I like to experience what the character have experience and stretching palms in my opinion ruins that for me so I like it when it first person base per se I guess per se

HopOffMe:I was just trying to introduce characters as having 10+ chapters of just being in a dungeon can get pretty boring without outside interaction. I can’t even get time to cook…
Daoistinc1G4
Daoistinc1G4Lv14

Fair but I just not that comfortable seeing others characters it just to me put out the creativity I like my story to be in the experience of the OC not other people point view otherwise what the point of even having A OC plus I really enjoy the dungeon creation story you have there it was very interesting how the main OC is created their unique dungeon and use the different parts of the dungeon in a unique way

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