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I completely agree it should be a slow drizzle something that the MC itself will pick up along the way no switching pods or doing a massive info dump for no reason other than explaining some thing it really should be a novel (I am assuming you're talking about the coming version) it's really what cut down on the unneeded text and save us a lot of trouble waiting and waiting or something actually going to happen

okay I got to chapter 13 before I have to stop for my sake at the very least but to summarize this whole thing it's boring all the way from chapter one to chapter 13 I've been only hearing nothing but the world background they're only literally one session where you actually known about the main character and so far all I know is he is in a apartment and he got a reward for containing a SCP that's it no character processing no minor log nothing while the rest I'm the world is continuing to put them simply it's bad not bad in the conventional sense bad as in the main character is self feel like a side character and the side characters act like more like main characters if you get what I'm saying but I'm simply this isn't my cup of tea

too much detail plus the character it seems to be stupid for one to get into subjects that were don't need to be explained such as the magical system I mean just by hearing the name "natural magic (pretty much it's automatic magic then you get from your genetics) creativity magic (lots of flexibility with the downside of being very unstable) rune magic (which is pretty much programming but in magic theme) I miss seriously just by me hearing it I understand it not to mention massive dump you did on the second chapter plus it doesn't even matter or the first two since the user gets going to stick with rune magic which even besides that he use it in a very stupid way more specifically why is he trying to simplify the ruin it technique for absorbing man for one why not you turn our parts of your body into mana vessels such as your bones I meant with his perfect mana control he could just simply cards runes into his bones to saturated and not just that replace it with the mana equivalent to store more mana inside of the bones even heck you could have a mana body in theory with this technique sure enough immediate but it is a way plus you don't need to rely on the mana core anymore sure it will be a big complicated after all you don't need just to condense Mona you also need to wait to break it down and you send mana in your bones which once again shouldn't be too hard since bones do have tons of holes in their body sure not much compared to birds but still their holes and even besides that part why in the world you are doing your job right now? you are in the middle of trying to figure out how to approve yourself doing a job right now is the last thing you need to do (say no by way why in the world the up there need to explain step by step of how his job work for both know it not a important subject right now it just seems to be a useless thing to add early maybe do it when it actually is useful) inside note you ask so much detail I had to skip through most of it so I could actually speed it along to where it is reasonable it always the first sign of what a bad story is to me that has so much detail around it they forgot how to actually do the story sure maybe fine for certain people I guess maybe with people who have ADHD but certainly not for me all together I have to say you make it too bloody long and mind you I was at chapter three three chapters in and I say it is too bloody long the person who gladly listens hundreds of chapters saying it is too long think about that)

written section first answer of the question "what is a spirit core" you are a web novel artist and you claim and I quote here "I read thousands of rev novel stories to be chunk plus I still think I am dreaming"but yet you don't know what a dentian core is.... who won those why you're web novel flopped so badly

the thing I never really understand is in these types of wet novels is the mindset why hurt your user or negatively infect them what you could have a more symbiosive parkway I don't compare to the more Bruno way of just simply infecting destroying then affecting again and the symbiosis fat seems to be way better especially when you are dealing with a sentient species in your planet after all those are the biggest problems towards a virus so why hurt them or do something negative to them but instead you can get way more benefits helping them for example just for starters they won't have a reason of why they should cure you or why they should limit your spreadability if anything they probably will purposely spread the disease to other people and other animals creatures and sent the human species already everywhere at the planet it would be way more easier for you to infect people that way even heck they probably wouldn't help you evolve by improving traits that day like or encouraging the virus to do more good than bad and the bigot benefit of this is unlike the first path no one will have a reason why to cure you sure we're talking about feelings that would be another story but that will live a good chunk of humanity think about it the first option you have to deal with a whole entire species a sentient one mind you trying to cure you and he probably be so much easy just simply get the virus through different means dissected to get it on Gino and create a virus that is the perfect counter to the original virus and spread that virus across the world if the equivalent of spreading little fire across the world for humans that's virus will most likely be dead or at the very least greatly weakened until it mutates to gain a resistance to that supposedly perfect antivirus and even then the sentient people could just repeat the whole process to cure it again possibly even boosting it to make sure the original virus is dead dead so way more smarter to simply cooperate with the sentient people then going full on murder hobo on them but that just my opinion and yes I don't know what will happen next but it nice to describe my thoughts so far on this web novel

to be honest the story is boring the whole entire beginning it's nothing but failure arcs wish don't get me wrong isn't too bad but it is seriously boring to be honest they did a good job with the world background have a lot of detail to it and I really don't know about the daily updates but to be honest the character development is low now don't get me wrong I'm not expecting like an instant hunch in fact that's what they did and it honestly disappoint me the writing quality though well it's poor the beginning points are either boring or doesn't make much sense like why does such a important artifact such as the cube got so close to the portal about her knowledge at all she is a God even a minor one and afterwards it just been nothing but boring dialogue no interesting spikes that lasts more than one chapter like for example when he chooses he is skills but other than those things I do have to admit the writing style is very detailed in fact it too much detail I usually have to skip a good chunk of boring dialogue and waste it long speeches because I already know what the general theme is just by reading a small part of the dialect my tip though next time if you go and make something like this maybe condense your words a bit use more time skips cutting out some unneeded dialect for example other than those things I got nothing else to say the book seem like it have some good potential in it it just been used in the wrong way sadly that's my opinion on it

okay number one that wasn't the guy fault if anything is your fault for leaving your bloody Divine fault open number two you shouldn't blame other people for something that you did and number three I get it you feel like you're in a dead-end job and you lost your equivalent of a free promotion I understand that doesn't meant you should lock everyone from getting a proper reincarnation just because you lost something deeply important to you after all you are immortal Sherry will be a living nightmare and a half trying to find one at the very least similar to it but still your model time doesn't exactly have a hold on you so please don't lock down such a pathway please (yes I know it is fake and yes I know it's already too late for the animator to change anything about it doesn't meant I cannot talk myself down from the equivalent of seeing my possible future clothes because of a accident that she calls I meant seriously if he has such a important artifact in there why you didn't add a second layer of security to make sure it doesn't leave said vault or I don't know literally landed right next to a person feet mind you you didn't even touch it he just touch it with his feet not pretty hands not with anything else just his feet and that activate I'm at seriously that's on her fault for not adding extra security for such a thing and you blaming it all on the rest of the reincarnating people for crying out loud the guy wasn't railing to get it out if he could not to mention the weird thing forcing him to go into a random direction it's just not fair for the guy or anyone involved I just hope once the guy is strong enough he can visit the girl who accidentally give him such a powerful thing and properly give her something better for her I'm just saying it's just not fair I get he is the main character but they surely a better way than they accidental package situation)

this is for chapter 20 of this book more specifically when she finds out the reason why she can't lose weight what a b******* move like just simply bad parenting for some you should tell them about set technique so they know the reason why they should do such a thing secondly you should help them with their problems if they are being bullied for something that you that she cannot change the example they are showing is such a terrible thing to do for a kid even heck they're a pretty high chance that it wasn't for the main character being there she will most likely die by suicide that's how bad it was I can literally go on for hours of how bad this is physically and mentally even conservation i e this experience can create heart demons that would limit her potential once again what a idiot her parent is the worst part at least one of them knows how bad it was and he do something like this it's like.... it's like when a person learns fire is bad to touch but purposely didn't teach her descendants about this of course I'm using ape level of teaching here so just picture the emotional impact as 10 times worse either way you understand how bad this is and how stupid it is to do such a terrible thing right?

the terms of episode 20 more specifically where the girl was explaining her family technique the parents are such a terrible parents not to mention they force feed her lots of food causing her to be bullied for a good chunk of her life and only tell her the reason why after she break through that's such a evil thing to do if the main character wasn't there there's a pretty good chance that she would have killed herself I'm not even joking would have killed herself thanks to her parents oh for what breaking through the second round the equivalent of a cultivator taking his second step what a idiot they are and not to mention the mental scars she have I'm seriously speaking I won't be surprised it create a heart demon possibly even multiple thanks to this I meant bye in her situation as soon as I hear them say those words immediately lash out on them heck I won't even kill them if they won't the higher level compared to herself because it's not just a b******* thing to do it's such a evil thing to do don't tell her something that important combine with not even bothering helping her with her life they are not meant to be parents I can definitely see that much or certain like I can go on for hours of how bad that is

I don't know if you are a robot or some sort of promoter or something like that but I'm going to tell you the truth this whole concept originally meant for writers to get ideas based on my own ideas but it pretty much have grown into a diary of sort so I'm not really interested in changing anything really now don't get me wrong it would be nice to have more people see it more but so it'd be more likely you're that someone actually create a story based on my own idea since I'm not much of a good writer myself especially since I can't read or write I'm currently using speech to text to help me put it down and I usually use text to speech to read text so to wrap it all up no I'm not interested in spreading my work if it is evolving changing my "riding style"or whatever you call this the only thing I want you to do if you just simply spread my book and that's it