Review Detail of Haizao in Watchman To Chaos Hero

Review time! The author has a strong voice throughout the story, and the protagonist definitely comes across as having a troubled past. Plot-wise, starting in the middle allowed for opening up to some pretty intense action, and sets up a nice and deep exploration of the main character. I think there's great potential for a character-driven exploration of the themes and politics that put the protagonist in such a terrible situation. On the technical side, there are mostly some issues with tense-case and a few misspellings, but nothing a good round of editing won't fix. Some of the dialogue can get a little confusing without indicators of who is speaking, and the extra space could be used to add little actions, facial expressions, etc. Overall I would say that the character interactions are great, but the dialogue can be a little anime-esque in terms of sudden dramatic increase. A solid start, and I'm sure once Nekoman finds his feet, it'll be off to the races.