A great concept, but with fundamental flaws. His power is supposed to be his clones - BUT! Instead of being independent entities able to assist him by learning on their own allowing him to learn multiple things quickly, they can only duplicate what he already knows and can not add to his skills at all. Basically, they're just puppets. The unfortunate side effect of this shows up in the early chapters with the author completely butchering the time lapse sequence, learning things that take years with no reference to how much time has passed. At a glance, his mentioned training should've covered something like 40+ years, but seems to only take place in a few days and at the same time decades. The author throws the entire timeframe in the trash by seemingly using two different timelines accidentally: the one for his training and the one for his sister at home. When things happen simply don't add up. Unfortunately, this novel is a confusing mess! 😕
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