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The heart of the novel is good, but there are holes in its logic. For example, how did he become a professor in astrology without a degree in Owls or Newt? The interview is very bad. The hero of the novel does not know anything about astrology and the magic related to it For example, there are certain potions that cannot be made or used Without the alignment of certain stars on specific days, and the rituals are based on knowledge of the stars and Their orientation , There is a whole branch in interpreting the unseen. And the creature that is famous for its stargazing, like the centaur. This is present in the original story, and the hero of the novel answered that it is useful in only two things: knowing if the student has a talent in divination and reverence, and what is surprising is that he was accepted? ?
Harry Potter: Hogwarts Professor
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LIKEMy friend, my problem is not with the hero of the novel, if he is stupid, then that is part of the novel. My problem is with Professor McGonagall. She is known for her strict adherence to laws and rules, and you're telling me that she accepts the protagonist's request to become a professor in this way. There is a point I forgot to mention. The background of the protagonist is unknown and he is not registered with the British Ministry or any other ministry around the world. In other words, the protagonist does not have identification papers or identity cards. This may not be a problem on a normal day, but when he applies for a job, especially on an education site in a famous school because children are dealt with on this site. Tom Marvelous Riddle was rejected three times because Dumbledore suspected him of being a dark wizard, which is just a suspicion, but the protagonist is completely unknown. If he was a professor teaching Defense Against the Dark Arts, I might accept him because this teaching site is just a decoration that changes every year. I am not telling you to stop writing this novel, but I hope you take into consideration the points I mentioned. The novel is good, and I will continue reading it. Can you make the novel’s hero take his position seriously? The novel’s hero does nothing all week, even though he is supposed to have class every night Per week from the first year to the seventh year.[img=Feeling it]
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