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VVartzLv144mth
2024-12-04 17:16

So the premises are 'fine' like other chat group novels. My problem would be the way the other members act, they act like idiots. threatening (still happened till chapter 12) other members as if they could do that when they know they couldn't do jackshit. if the one who acts like that has a bit of a mental problem then it's fine but, one of them is a princess who should have prior knowledge of how the world works. another would be the starting point of the MC's power, author decides to give the MC an experience but what he got seems more like knowledge than an experience and that just irked me. Experience and knowledge are different. Should've put knowledge instead of experience; knowing how to kick a ball like a professional and used to kick a ball as a professional is a different thing altogether. Now about the good bit, each chapter has a nice length so reading them is fun. with my meagre knowledge of grammar, it is good so far (I have read) yet. All in all, take it with grains of salt. read it first before judging if it's good or bad. your taste is your own after all.

THE ALTERNATE MULTIVERSE CHAT GROUP

krakenian
4.6
44 Chs

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krakenian
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Well, here's the cheating review from the author giving a 5 star rating! Now that the first volume is finished, feel free to send in your recommendations for rewards for the chat members (skills, items, traits, and so on), any suggestions for a new chat member, from the ones you saw on the initial list I gave or from another franchise (preferably a finished one, that way it would be easier to write), or any suggestions in general. I'm doing my best to bring the second volume out as soon as possible, but I want to take my time to gather the necessary information before I dare to go back to posting a chapter a week or even 2 like I did at the beginning of this story. That being said, if you're reading this before reading the story then I hope you enjoy it.

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Artemisix_01
Artemisix_01Lv13

Love it already just please whatever you do please no harem it ruins chat groups but otherwise it's good

10mth
InterPlanarGod
InterPlanarGodLv13

Wow, webnovel really buries all the good stuff for some reason until after you find it elsewhere. A more reasonable take on MC Groups. MC grows at a normal-cheat pace instead of a "I'm a god because I exist"-cheat pace. and thats much better. The characterization is good and I enjoyed what parts of it are available immensely! Just sad I find the good stuff on fanfiction first and have to dig deep for them in order to review here.

5mth
stelvis
stelvisLv4

So far the fic is pretty good. For now slow development(but not too much). The MC has potential, but for now is weak.

7mth
Anide_Oficial
Anide_OficialLv13

Reveal spoiler

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rosasola
rosasolaLv1

So far I like it, Ryuichi seems interesting, the clues and mysteries you've given about him and his brother make me want to know more about their past.

6mth
I_was_bored
I_was_boredLv13

awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Avispatres_3
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