For those who don't like tragedy stories, I recommend that you don't read this here, avoid it at all costs, the author simply killed half of everyone he knew, And I don't doubt he kills the rest later too, because this is the type of writer who only knows how to develop a character by killing everyone around him. He killed his father, mother, grandparents and teachers, I have no doubt about killing his brothers in the future, for more character "development", simply pathetic, After all, it's the only way to develop character that he knows, to kill everyone involved with the protagonist

The story seems to rely on gratuitous shocks and unnecessary violence. This is not only problematic but also detracts from what could have been a more engaging narrative. Thirty chapters were spent on character development, but in the end, it all seemed pointless. There are countless ways to build characters effectively and develop plots that truly matter. Unfortunately, all the time and effort put into reading this content were not rewarded, as many characters introduced did not have any significant importance to the story. It's frustrating to have spent hours trying to memorize character names that, in the end, contributed nothing to the outcome. I hope that future narratives learn from these mistakes and focus on providing readers with a more rewarding and meaningful experience.

This rewrite is really cool, I've always really liked MC, non-humans, especially dragons, the original didn't really hook me, but this one is making me even more excited to see it and keep up with the releases xD

HungryMushroom Amazing fanfic Keep doing an amazing job You can do this Danmachi Fanfic idea directly after you finish Reborn in Danmachi as a Dragon-Kin (Rewrite) Shadow Monarch in Danmachi A soul is reborn into Danmachi with the powers of the Shadow Monarch. What will he do now? Harem Hestia Ais Wallenstein Riveria Ljos Alf Ryuu Lion Tione Hiryute Tiona Hiryute Freya Hephaestus Demeter Aisha Belka Phryne Jamil Lena Tally Samira Sanjouno Haruhime Ishtar Bache Kalif Argana Kalif Tsubaki Collbrande Laura Shakti Varma Sophia Flores Emma Flores

Authors usual 5 star review, enjoy the series.

Romance+R18+Harem+Danmatchi= Awesome..... usually, but not this time. "THE MC IS 12 YEARS OLD FFS!!!!!" as of chapter 90. In my opinion, three of the tags are LIES to get people to read because I don't see the author getting the mc to 18 by chapter 400, which will more than likely be dropped by then seems like a big CON to me.

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I really like this novel, the only thing I hope is that it doesn't drag on too much with childhood, it is also updated more constantly and something I would like would be for the fights to be as epic as in the original danmachi.

Muito bom, mas tem espaço para melhoras. ...... ...... ....... ....... ..... ....... ...... ...... ....... ....... ....... ........ ...... ...... ...... ......