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2024-05-29 14:22

Interesting beginning so far, i like how fast the Mc grows and the funny conversations with the system. the grammar needs to be worked on but as an experienced reader i can say that it's supportable. The story for now hasn't progressed much but some months have already passed. The world background is just like the synopsis said and for now we haven't explored it deeply. The updating stability is pretty good for now, one chapter a day so I'm satisfied. The Mc is funny, the only sad thing is how he is behaving with the 'wife' i understand that he feels a little wary but since I'm an individual that likes to take challenges, his timid moments really turn me off. But the author said that he will change so i have good faith. Recommended.

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