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UBI_Master
UBI_MasterLv45mth
2024-06-30 17:50

1 word. Elegance. *Minuet by Boccherini.mp3 start playing. Splendid i say. This piece of literature is excellent. How wonderful. (Okay let's be serious.) This book have some Shakespeare - like naration. Maybe one of the best you can find in this app. The detail, the exposition... Amazing... The purple prose just show how high literature author is. BUT... What can be the weapon, can be also be the weakness. Since it's an action genre, I feel less thrill than it should be. The elegance naration just shackle the action and forcing it into slow paced tempo of action. I wish author san want to make it more fast-paced in action naration in the future chapter. other than that. It's excellent. The World building explained vividly and the power system is immaculate. Kudos to the author. 😆😆😆

Blood For Magic

DivineCrimson
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DivineCrimson
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"Thanks for the pointers; criticism is as much appreciated as praises, always ready to learn and improve."

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"Why the 5-star rating, you ask? Well, it's like finding a hidden gem in a pile of rocks - this novel shines! Wrote it, loved it, still loving it. Now, don't be too harsh, folks. It's my debut novel after all. Bring on the feedback - I can take it. Drop your thoughts in the comments below. Much obliged! 🙏"

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neo001
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i had read up to 58 chapters and it's a refreshing change from typical system novels. The author’s detailed prose and well-crafted power system create an immersive world. The main character, though a genius, often finds himself helpless against older, more seasoned adversaries, adding a realistic touch. If you’re looking for a break from conventional system novels, it's an excellent choice. Highly recommend!

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Theothecolossal
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Its a unique Idea a far stray from the typical systems out there its an underrated novel considering it's update stability and the amount of chapters left to us, keep it up author you'll hit big

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ArtbusterBeeze
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This was quite well made and I like it. The beginning took me by storm when it came to character design. Author knows characters well and have a big vocabulary for them, so this is quite unique with the style. There weren't much Grammar issues to speak up except a few mispelled words, but it didn't take anything away from the experience. The Action was pretty cool too. This is a Great story hands down.

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Dungeon_Warrior
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Awesome novel with a nice start, plot development and description . [img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]

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Shade_Arjuun
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I have to say the author's writing style, encompassing their vocabulary and ability to make each moment is what makes this book really interesting. I myself prefer a slower pace that emphasises every moment. Very good so far

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Allen_Clay012
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I cannot help but praise the author of the skill displayed in writing this novel. This is not the usual stuff you read in this platform. This story is one of the best I read. Also, the chapter update is solid I believe that this work will reach a milestone within the suceeding months. Keep writing, you have made a good work. It only needs exposure!

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bearateme_
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Like how the writer has deviated from the usual web novel novels and tried to make a unique, different story. Look forward to how the story turns out to bee

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