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DivineCrimson
DivineCrimsonAuthor11mth
2024-05-08 17:48

"Why the 5-star rating, you ask? Well, it's like finding a hidden gem in a pile of rocks - this novel shines! Wrote it, loved it, still loving it. Now, don't be too harsh, folks. It's my debut novel after all. Bring on the feedback - I can take it. Drop your thoughts in the comments below. Much obliged! 🙏"

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JBFIRE_77
JBFIRE_77Lv4

Is there romance in this novel? please no it holds back the MC

DivineCrimson
DivineCrimsonAuthor

Sure, I'll make sure the main character stays as single as a slice of cheese in a vegan fridge. No romance, just pure, undiluted action—like a caffeine-fueled squirrel on a mission. 😂😂 On a serious note, there will be a slow burn romance, but mostly from the female side. It'll simmer here and there without holding back the MC's epic journey.

JBFIRE_77
JBFIRE_77Lv4

well is the MC going to make stupid discison because of his feelings? just want to know before i read

DivineCrimson:Sure, I'll make sure the main character stays as single as a slice of cheese in a vegan fridge. No romance, just pure, undiluted action—like a caffeine-fueled squirrel on a mission. 😂😂 On a serious note, there will be a slow burn romance, but mostly from the female side. It'll simmer here and there without holding back the MC's epic journey.
DivineCrimson
DivineCrimsonAuthor

Orion is a man of cold logic , so he doesn't let his emotions cloud his judgment. But sometimes, even he slips. In fact, making stupid decisions because of their feelings (not limited to romance counter part) is practically a requirement for main characters. If they didn't, we’d have no plot twists, no drama, and worst of all, no opportunities to yell at the screen, "Why would you do that?!" It's all part of the entertainment package!

JBFIRE_77
JBFIRE_77Lv4

he can make stupid discison, i just Don't want it to happen because of romance, it's annoying every novel i read the MC is smart but when a Fl is introduce their IQ drop significantly, it's predictable and it's the same predictable romance they either hinder MC from advancing faster, become bloodsucker ( MC have to provide them with resources and get little in return or nothing ), they give the MC their problem to solve, too clingly, they want to know the MC secrets and if he don't tell them it means he don't love them smh, and some author love to give the Fl powerup to make her the same level as the MC which i don't like because I want the MC to stand above all , some other reason but u get the picture. what I'm really interested in is how the MC solve situation and use is brain, power systems, power ups and the fights

DivineCrimson:Orion is a man of cold logic , so he doesn't let his emotions cloud his judgment. But sometimes, even he slips. In fact, making stupid decisions because of their feelings (not limited to romance counter part) is practically a requirement for main characters. If they didn't, we’d have no plot twists, no drama, and worst of all, no opportunities to yell at the screen, "Why would you do that?!" It's all part of the entertainment package!
Jorlat123
Jorlat123Lv14

What you’re saying is mostly only happening in chinese cultivation novels. And it’s not like the MC’s didn’t benefit from the FML at least from those I have read. Let’s just let the author cook and see how it goes.

JBFIRE_77:he can make stupid discison, i just Don't want it to happen because of romance, it's annoying every novel i read the MC is smart but when a Fl is introduce their IQ drop significantly, it's predictable and it's the same predictable romance they either hinder MC from advancing faster, become bloodsucker ( MC have to provide them with resources and get little in return or nothing ), they give the MC their problem to solve, too clingly, they want to know the MC secrets and if he don't tell them it means he don't love them smh, and some author love to give the Fl powerup to make her the same level as the MC which i don't like because I want the MC to stand above all , some other reason but u get the picture. what I'm really interested in is how the MC solve situation and use is brain, power systems, power ups and the fights
JBFIRE_77
JBFIRE_77Lv4

most of the books I have read have the same things so I just get tired of FL and Romance in general when I'm reading a novel but I'll see what the author is cooking

Jorlat123:What you’re saying is mostly only happening in chinese cultivation novels. And it’s not like the MC’s didn’t benefit from the FML at least from those I have read. Let’s just let the author cook and see how it goes.
Shooting_Mushroom
Shooting_MushroomLv4

update this story , Author

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