Solid freaking book! There are a few things to patch up here and there, one of them being the fact that it takes over 9 chapters for the actual story to kick in. I'd suggest reading Revenge of the Weakest Hunter for references on how to properly execute a start to a story. This has love which is all readers can hope for✨
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