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SuperEpicGamer123
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2024-08-04 22:43

I really like this. Other than the other isekai into novel tropes, this one has an original twist that makes it interesting. I wont leave any spoilers though.

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Alex_Greave
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i want spoiler 🥹

avbutt
avbuttAuthor

what spoiler do you want?

Alex_Greave:i want spoiler 🥹
PurePixie
PurePixieLv3

I have a question about Ruby. Wasn’t she supposed to be the villain, but why was she sad about the og (original) MCS in chapter 72? It’s kinda pulling me off since I kinda expected her to be a bit more apathetic; it kinda ruined her character for me, at least since I expected her and mc to be the duo outside of the og (original) MCs, or is it cuz the plot is still at the beginning so she didn’t become a complete villain. Also, is Mc deeds always gonna be hidden like in chap 76? I’m kinda holding the novel for now since Ruby’s whole thing kinda made me less interested in reading the novel further, so spoilers about it would be appreciated. Anyway, other than that, it’s not bad, though. I hope you can increase his charm to an average level cuz (G+) is crazy work, tho C-D is fine, Tbf. And also, is he gonna become complete friends with og MCs? Or at the level of acquaintances? I hope it’s latter, especially with Lily; I hope you don’t make the cliche choice of making them good old friends.

avbutt:what spoiler do you want?
Alex_Greave
Alex_GreaveLv3

YESH BRO YESH YES!!!

avbutt:what spoiler do you want?
avbutt
avbuttAuthor

It's kind of an odd relationship he has with the main cast. He's good friends with Alya and Zach, who owe him a favor and he's grown quite close to. He's neutral with Lily, Kevin, and Irene. But Liam doesn't necessarily like him (for good reason). Also the Ruby and Ren duo is dampened for a bit but around chapter 120, it's back as you'll see. He teams up with the main cast essentially, but works secretly with Ruby. As for why Ruby is the main cast, we know that Lily likes to reform people from the book (as soon with Irene's change from villain to member), so that's why she's 'part' of the main cast.

PurePixie:I have a question about Ruby. Wasn’t she supposed to be the villain, but why was she sad about the og (original) MCS in chapter 72? It’s kinda pulling me off since I kinda expected her to be a bit more apathetic; it kinda ruined her character for me, at least since I expected her and mc to be the duo outside of the og (original) MCs, or is it cuz the plot is still at the beginning so she didn’t become a complete villain. Also, is Mc deeds always gonna be hidden like in chap 76? I’m kinda holding the novel for now since Ruby’s whole thing kinda made me less interested in reading the novel further, so spoilers about it would be appreciated. Anyway, other than that, it’s not bad, though. I hope you can increase his charm to an average level cuz (G+) is crazy work, tho C-D is fine, Tbf. And also, is he gonna become complete friends with og MCs? Or at the level of acquaintances? I hope it’s latter, especially with Lily; I hope you don’t make the cliche choice of making them good old friends.
avbutt
avbuttAuthor

The book follows Ren, a fallen noble who was suspended from school for being stupid. Follow that, Ren gains a special ability that allows him to control his perception of time. From there, Ren embarks on a journey to gain new powers, keep the world from ending, and making relationships. Let me know if you have any specific questions.

Alex_Greave:YESH BRO YESH YES!!!
kartik_porwal
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Hlo there author.i really wanna ask something is ruby really a female lead for the book i mean i am at around chapter 220 something and i know for a fact that ruby spends almost all the time with the main cast and only some occasional time if ever with ren,it is getting really boring you know like the MC is important i know but ultimately it is the side characters and other leads that makes the story alive ,when ruby got introduced i was really excited thinking about the bantering and all but ruby is now feeling like nothing other than another member of the main cast who just sometimes meets with MC and chat with him

avbutt:The book follows Ren, a fallen noble who was suspended from school for being stupid. Follow that, Ren gains a special ability that allows him to control his perception of time. From there, Ren embarks on a journey to gain new powers, keep the world from ending, and making relationships. Let me know if you have any specific questions.
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