Item: I'm an Internet Cafe Owner?
Rating: 3
Author: DetachedDreamer

DetachedDreamerLv148mth

2024-07-23 02:44

This story needs more than a translator. it needs an editor. and it needs a new MC. 96% of asian MCs in translated stories like this are all the same, garbage. if you translate garbage then you take responsibility for garbage. the idea of the story is amazing but thats literally it. I think something is wrong in the head of the OG writer but choosing to translate a lazy, poor version in english is its own kind of crazy. but so is anyone translating a story without the correct level of English to do so. I gave it a chance but man. run.

I'm an Internet Cafe Owner?

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