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MartiniSippinAngel
MartiniSippinAngelLv154mth
2024-08-25 07:16

This is an admirable attempt at writing a comedic, tower-challenge super powers story. Unfortunately, I couldn't push through to the end of the currently published chapters. What I did like was the Eye of Truth. It behaved like a wise-cracking, sentient AI that gave me a few chuckles in an otherwise bland story. However, its absolutely broken abilities, that expand as the story goes on, made it hard to take this story seriously. The quality of the writing is readable but unimpressive. The world building is very bare-bones. There is very little description of anything (characters, places, etc). There is no twist or unique aspect that separates this tower novel from the others on this platform. Ultimately, if you read this as a parody of the genre, and all of the derivative, copy-cat SSS (insert power) Tower webnovels, this can be considered somewhat amusing. But from the 30 or so chapters I read, it's not worth the time.

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