The Mc has the power of Kamui Mangekyo sharingan but he thinks he still cant go inside impel down to get Ace back from Marines which is a big no brain action and just forceful plot following, you either dont give him op abilities or dont force the plot

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It's not bad, but not good either. even with major changes to the power of various factions, results of major events stay the same like the war of the best.

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Awesome story, I thought it would be a bad run of the mill op mc story but I was dead wrong this was amazingly written and well translated. Marineford war arc is amazing

I'm not going to give you a low review, I'm just going to say something so far like the idea of the novel and I know it's a translation, you don't have to do it but It would make this novel more enjoyable if you heavily translate some of the parts that you know are not pleasing, for example the name of MC or sometimes swords being called knives which happens a lot you don't have to go back and change them if you don't want to but I promise you'll make the novel more enjoyable that way,but I haven't read it yet and I'm going to give it a shot I'll update my review later

Fix it but it’s still a great book everything else you did is good

muito bom esse capítulo espero que você tenha um raio de sol aparecendo de novo para você continua a escrever esses belíssimos capítulos que você faz