Wet_Dream

Pls use punctuation

He should be heavier (if you upscale a normal one) cus of the cube square law

Only issue I can find is the time. Specifically the „eating for 5 minutes“ since you can probably finish a bit carcass in like 30 secs. Just put „a short while“ or soon or sum Thx

If you drop this I will (●´ω｀●)٩(๑❛ᴗ❛๑)۶ [img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]

Bro lost his aura

It’s not really clear if he’s from the jojo world or our world originally

Leon Ferreira be like:

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Goofy writing style

Pretty good so far, with an interesting premise and no major flaws. Though it is quite early to tell. [img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]