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I have read this story from many different authors and I can say so far this one is the best translated and fixed version so far so please keep it up.
My diary system in Marvel
TheWandaShip
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You can check out the original MTL at fansmtl(dot)org The MTL is called "People are keeping Diaries in Marvel, The Avengers are confused". Just type "Diary in Marvel" in the search bar of Webnovel and you'll find the other authors translating the same work. The one by FFAddict is a different story, just to let you know. I read one by Blackgoku22 or smtg along that user, almost the same as the MTL just changed the name from Su Che to Suke
InsanityIsLife:Mind if I ask who the authors were so I can see the impact of what the original was like too?
TheWandaShip:You can check out the original MTL at fansmtl(dot)org The MTL is called "People are keeping Diaries in Marvel, The Avengers are confused". Just type "Diary in Marvel" in the search bar of Webnovel and you'll find the other authors translating the same work. The one by FFAddict is a different story, just to let you know. I read one by Blackgoku22 or smtg along that user, almost the same as the MTL just changed the name from Su Che to Suke
Just finished and felt comfortable leaving you a review now. I do have some advice, though. It's fine to make the story flow better and fix some things, but if I were you, I'd continue to leave the main story points in and not get to change happy. But at the end of the day, it's your choice. Just know that so far, you have my approval and attention. For whatever it's worth.
TheWandaShip:don't worry. I gotchu buddy, I gotchu
Yup, that's what I am hoping to do :D I'm not really a creative person by any means, I wont be able to come up with my own story. So im using the main plotlines of this MTL to write my chapters if i feel like the MTL chapter is rather lacking. If not, I am just editing it to make it more coherent and understandable for the rest of us. On that note, if im not mistaken, the only plotline that i truly changed is Wanda and the romance. Wanda felt too unrealistic and the romance was too one-dimensional. My Wanda will be more rational and cautious towards Luke, and the romance won't be as easy as "You are my wife," "Awww okay i am your wife" like it was in the MTL
InsanityIsLife:Just finished and felt comfortable leaving you a review now. I do have some advice, though. It's fine to make the story flow better and fix some things, but if I were you, I'd continue to leave the main story points in and not get to change happy. But at the end of the day, it's your choice. Just know that so far, you have my approval and attention. For whatever it's worth.image
I completely agree, I did find that off putting! Also I’m really glad to hear that, I have seen way to many authors go so far off the rails with the plot when doing this saying “The novel went down hill so I changed it.” Then just stop uploading because they didn’t know where to go with it. So I just wanted to check.
TheWandaShip:Yup, that's what I am hoping to do :D I'm not really a creative person by any means, I wont be able to come up with my own story. So im using the main plotlines of this MTL to write my chapters if i feel like the MTL chapter is rather lacking. If not, I am just editing it to make it more coherent and understandable for the rest of us. On that note, if im not mistaken, the only plotline that i truly changed is Wanda and the romance. Wanda felt too unrealistic and the romance was too one-dimensional. My Wanda will be more rational and cautious towards Luke, and the romance won't be as easy as "You are my wife," "Awww okay i am your wife" like it was in the MTL
