TheWandaShip
Hi, I was an avid reader of fanfictions. I have read so many that I stumbled onto MTLs. And now, I help to heavily edit MTLs and share them!
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TheWandaShip1hReplied to TheWandaShip- TheWandaShip9hReplied to Tunic01
Hi there! I have made my own translation of a similar MTL called "People are keeping diaries in Marvel, the Avengers are confused"! Though in my translations, I have cleaned up almost EVERYTHING from the MTL, and you will notice the Stark difference between my version and the MTL + other translators version. Basically I overhauled everything, in the hopes of making the story better and enhancing reader experience! Hope you could check it out!
- TheWandaShip9hReplied to Countdown
Hi there! I have made my on translation of the MTL! I have cleaned up almost EVERYTHING from the MTL, and you will notice the Stark difference between my version and the MTL + other translators version, even this one. Hope you can check! The original MTL is called "People are keeping diaries in Marvel, the Avengers are confused" BUT BE WARNED, THE MTL IS REALLY CONFUSING AND HORRIBLE. Idea was great, but like many others before it, execution was horrible. That's where i come in :D
Ch 11 Chapter 011 - TheWandaShip9hReplied to PhysX
Hi there! I have made my on translation of the MTL! I have cleaned up almost EVERYTHING from the MTL, and you will notice the Stark difference between my version and the MTL + other translators version, even this one. Hope you can check!
Just as her mentality was slowly changing, the next second, the sky was completely dark. - TheWandaShip10hReplied to JandrakenIn the very next moment after Luke had given the command, he had found himself lying down on a new bed, staring up into an unfamiliar ceiling. As if answering his confusion, a swarm of memories and experiences began rushing towards him, assimilating into his very existence. 'Huh, this feels, oddly weird. It feels as though these memories and experiences has been with me the whole time, just waiting to be unlocked. But at the same time, experiencing this for the first time feels, well weird.' Taking a moment to gather his thoughts, Luke continued, 'It seems the system has sent me to the very moment I started the diary with â The aftermath of our win against Kang and the TVA. Conveniently enough, I seem to also have the memories and experiences of the events that I wrote down of in the second entry. Oh god, I'm not going to turn into a hero like Batman or Spider-man, am I? F*ck! 'With great Power, comes great Responsibilities' my ass! Power is Power! . . . Well shit. If I had known about this, I would've written about something else.'
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- TheWandaShip15hReplied to TyrantTron335
Yup, but remember in chapter 5 i added a limitation to this ability specifically targetting this. This way, for Major villains like Thanos or Kang, MC can't just mummify the villains. It's more of band-aid plot protection from a big plothole i guess xD
'Alright, all things considered, with complete mastery over Water Manipulation, I could become the strongest person alive! Just kidding. Thanos could still eat me for breakfast. However, I should still keep up the act of having to create an action in order to perform my abilities just so that I could keep a trump card. If on the off chance that I ever get captured, and my captors kept me paralyzed thinking I wouldn't be able to use my abilities that way, then it would be hilarious to see their reaction when they find out just how mistaken they were.' Concluding his experiments, Luke was overall satisfied with his ability upgrade. Afterwards, Luke went to lie down on his bed and closed his eyes, mentally preparing himself for what was to come next. - TheWandaShip15hReplied to Jandraken
Kid's these days huh
As Wanda read the diary, she had absolutely no idea what Luke was writing about initially, only that she was told by someone of how terrible S.H.I.E.L.D. was. If there was one thing that she did not like about Luke currently, it would be his wanting to get close to Tony Stark, the murderer of her parents. She had sworn to herself that she would avenge her parents, and the people currently 'overlooking her living arrangements' had promised to take care of her and her brother, and to give her the powers to do take her revenge when they were picked up after her parents' funeral. How naĂŻve she was back then. - TheWandaShip15hReplied to Jandraken
Criticisms help to better people as long as they are well founded and constructive :D In my case, i'm just fishing for your cookies, you got any cookies for me :3? But on the real, thanks for the criticism! It does help me review and hopefully make changes to the story for the better
Hello my fellow takodachis! This is not a chapter update, but rather a story update! For old readers, this will be especially important for you!I have ret-conned chapters 05, 06 and 07 after some feedback about how I dealt with Wanda and the MC's backstory portion in chapter 06. And while I will still make this a Wandaship, I feel like I could have done better in setting the foundations for the romance. On the backstory, I fleshed it out further and TRIED my hardest to properly play out my vinland saga moment, though i'm not sure how well it turned out. And so, I have made some changes. For old reader's, I HOPE that the changes made the story better, and for the new readers, thanks for trying out my version of the MTL fanfic! Additionally, after reviewing the chapters, I added and removed a few more dialogues because when I checked the MTL, although they say a few things, these things always get ignored or just one statement commented on by the Chinese authors. I want to fix that. Please help me to point out any important points that I have missed out so that I can ret-con them and administer damage control. At this moment, only Chapters 05, 06 and 07 have been ret-conned. Additionally, I will be changing the name of the MC to "Luke Sullivan" from now on! In the end "Sunny" just felt like a weird name in the MCU. For this, I've already updated all the previous chapters. - TheWandaShip15hReplied to Daoist302685
- TheWandaShip16hReplied to LocalDrunkCh 8 *IMPORTANT STORY UPDATES*
- TheWandaShip16hReplied to Jandraken
Thanks! Also, I have changed alot about how i wrote Wanda and also about Luke's backstory, do take a look and let me know if the changes were for the better! DO NOTE, I am still going with the Uncle Ben route, but I tried to make it more natural and less sudden
Ch 5 C05 - Reflection. - TheWandaShip16hReplied to Mohammad_AmarCh 6 C06 - Wanda.
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Author review! Though im not really author of the fanfic, just author of this particular book xD So, This is a MTL that's being heavily edited by me. The ratio is roughly 20:80, meaning 20% is true to MTL source, and 80% has been re-written to make the story more coherent and readable for the rest of us. I have changed ALOT from the original MTL, and it is my hope that the changes were for the better. Some issues that I noticed: 1) Romance. Is this Harem? I dont know. I am only at chapter 44 on the MTL. I can say for sure that the MAIN FML will be Wanda. This is non-negotiable because I am a Wandaship :D. Now, the romance between my book and the MTL will also be different. I will try to build the romance up instead of going like the MTL "You are my wife", "Yes I am your wife". In this fanfic, the romance that the MC shows on the Diary is complete BOGUS. It never happened. in fact, whatever is written in the diary is complete BOGUS, but the diary holders don't know that. So some interactions might make you go "If only they knew", well they don't, and that's what I like about the fanfic đđ Wanda is aged 16, while the MC is aged 19. Some people were worried that i was having an old war veteran chasing after a young girl, nah nah. I think 16 and 19 is a decent age to set the FOUNDATIONS of a romance. Not full on romance yet, just the foundations. Wanda WILL make the comparisons of "If the other Wanda can love him, then so can I" but just take this at face value. This was meant to just show that Wanda is open to exploring romantic r/s with MC, but not as a GUARANTEED romance with MC. 2) Overboard. I have been told that i tend to go overboard with the way i Write. Please keep this in mind 3) Similarity. REMEMBER, THIS IS NOT AN ORIGINAL FANFIC. So of course there will be similarity to the actual source material xD I am only changing a few things to enhance the story. If you want to see the difference, check out "People are keeoing diaries in Marvel, The Avengers are confused" I will put up an Auxiliary chap soon for character pics, info, and any other things i need to point out! Thanks for reading!
- TheWandaShip1dReplied to Jandraken
Another thing about the romance is i've aged up the Maximoffs xD They are now 16 instead of 14. And in the MTL, Sunny's age was revealed to be 19. Romance between actual MC and wanda from the Diary romance will be different. At the very least, my version of Wanda wont be going head over heels for Sunny, tho on Sunny's side, there's alittle plot that needs to happen but I will try to tone down everything else đđ
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