webnovel
Ep_E_X
Ep_E_XLv27mth
2024-08-23 15:51

Writing Quality Updating Stability Story Development Character Design world background Overall Rate 0.0 Review should be more than 140 characters

Liked by 9 people

LIKE
Replies9
TheWandaShip
TheWandaShipAuthor

i am, so confused .-. can someone make sense of this .-.

GRANDMAESTA_30
GRANDMAESTA_30Lv14

I am as confused as you author 🤔.

TheWandaShip:i am, so confused .-. can someone make sense of this .-.
IPJulius
IPJuliusLv14

I think Ep_E_X just wanted to give 1 star review but was forced to type 140 words so he just copy and pasted those things???

FathomableBread
FathomableBreadLv4

Don’t worry, he comments that everytime. It’s like, every novel is the same to him lol

TheWandaShip:i am, so confused .-. can someone make sense of this .-.
Aghil
AghilLv14

Why is this pinned to the top of the comments? This should just be deleted or ignored completely.

ReactionAddiction
ReactionAddictionLv4

pin of shame

Aghil:Why is this pinned to the top of the comments? This should just be deleted or ignored completely.
image
DaoistjQtMkq
DaoistjQtMkqLv3

Is this harem novel?

_Human_
_Human_Lv4

Here we found someone's abandoned child

TheWandaShip
TheWandaShipAuthor

probably not. ATM i'm still only set on having Wanda sole FML

DaoistjQtMkq:Is this harem novel?
Other Reviews
TheWandaShip
TheWandaShipAuthor

Author review! Though im not really author of the fanfic, just author of this particular book xD So, This is a MTL that's being heavily edited by me. The ratio is roughly 20:80, meaning 20% is true to MTL source, and 80% has been re-written to make the story more coherent and readable for the rest of us. I have changed ALOT from the original MTL, and it is my hope that the changes were for the better. Some issues that I noticed: 1) Romance. Is this Harem? I dont know. I am only at chapter 44 on the MTL. I can say for sure that the MAIN FML will be Wanda. This is non-negotiable because I am a Wandaship :D. Now, the romance between my book and the MTL will also be different. I will try to build the romance up instead of going like the MTL "You are my wife", "Yes I am your wife". In this fanfic, the romance that the MC shows on the Diary is complete BOGUS. It never happened. in fact, whatever is written in the diary is complete BOGUS, but the diary holders don't know that. So some interactions might make you go "If only they knew", well they don't, and that's what I like about the fanfic 😂😂 Wanda is aged 16, while the MC is aged 19. Some people were worried that i was having an old war veteran chasing after a young girl, nah nah. I think 16 and 19 is a decent age to set the FOUNDATIONS of a romance. Not full on romance yet, just the foundations. Wanda WILL make the comparisons of "If the other Wanda can love him, then so can I" but just take this at face value. This was meant to just show that Wanda is open to exploring romantic r/s with MC, but not as a GUARANTEED romance with MC. 2) Overboard. I have been told that i tend to go overboard with the way i Write. Please keep this in mind 3) Similarity. REMEMBER, THIS IS NOT AN ORIGINAL FANFIC. So of course there will be similarity to the actual source material xD I am only changing a few things to enhance the story. If you want to see the difference, check out "People are keeoing diaries in Marvel, The Avengers are confused" I will put up an Auxiliary chap soon for character pics, info, and any other things i need to point out! Thanks for reading!

Related Stories

As Sukuna in Invincible

The Honoured One... A title bestowed upon the one who's pleasure and displeasure matter above all else within the bounds of Heaven and Earth. That is who I have become. Satoru Gojo - The Six Eyes may have claimed this title for himself, declared it to all of Creation and went unchallenged for it for years, till the awakening of the man I have been transmigrated as. I intend to honour that title. Power is meant to be used - to change one's life with. And change it I shall. ---------------------------- (Author note: This guy will be a lot like Sukuna in personality, but not a carbon copy - he will have his own views and thoughts that will contradict canon Sukuna, cause this guy is a transmigrated soul from our world who was thrown into the Invincible world with all of Sukuna's powers. Also, he was geniunely Sukuna in his past life. Romance: Sukuna X Yandere Eve Sukuna is in the body of Megumi (Shadows yet to be tamed) to be as clear as possible :A person from our world, reincarnated as Sukuna in JJK without his memories and then before the fight with Gojo disappeared and reincarnated in Invincible as a guy funnily with the name Megumi Fushiguro and recently remembered all his 3 lives. his memory is a bit convoluted in the beginning that's why he thinks its transmigration. Read the auxiliary chapter for Sukuna's power level compared to this world, because I am taking some vague statements about Sukuna in JJK canon, to make him strong enough to not just be crushed in an instant in a world with Viltrumites. Hope to see you guys soon, Bye!)

Samael_Son_of_Dawn · Anime & Comics
4.5
82 Chs