Aghil
Voluntary loner. I prefer being by myself most times. Other times I'm out with friends doing whatever we felt like doing. Currently I'm a junior in a University. Not much else to say.
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I see that you really don't like Edward at all. I mean come on I know he does some stupid stuff but seriously lay off of him a bit unless you are trying to set Edward up as a temporary antagonist or something like that. Then I say go all the way with this LOL!!!
It would be a cool back story if Damon mentioned that his mother was a Shifter and father was the werewolf and they used a sacrificing technique/ability together that removed Damon's ability to propagate like vampires did and that the only way to have a new werewolf now was thru the old fashioned way...coitus. That way Rosalie is able to fulfill her wish to have a baby. I just thought of this after reading chapter 14. Doesn't have to be used or even considered I just thought it was an interesting idea that popped into my head.
I appreciate the fact that even if this was a Chinese translation it does not have the heavy atmosphere of giving face, or that young master vibe you would usually get. Still They should really avoid using Chinese names as much as possible especially since the MC is American, and setting is in America. It just doesn't make sense to make the name of the company Chinese when the only Chinese thing about MC is the soul and half his memories. They could at least make something up in English heck they could have used "Dawn film studio" and that would justify the logo MC described. I can guarantee that if that were to happen back in 2007 in Hollywood you would make an enemy of most of Hollywood only because you don't have a Chinese background, you would also most likely land yourself in the NSA/CIA watchlist as a possible spy or traitor (although I'm not too sure if we even have an NSA/CIA watch list like that, but I'm sure we have something similar).
I noticed that author is trying to make the scene and logic of things seem natural, like with how expensive things are to be a farmer, but by doing so it makes being a pokemon trainer seem unnaturally difficult and unsustainable and this may be unintentional by author
Why is it that every choice he makes ends in violence? I understand the need for expansion and the reason for the war with the Fir race, but he actually wants to fight every race he encounters, its like his given up diplomacy and just wants to rob the whole universe and kill anything not local to his region.
I thought that it was stated earlier that the system space can only store items that the system gives and nothing else or am I mistaken?
Just saying but the time conversion of 1 hour for every 4 days means that after 10,000 years about 104 years on earth would have passed. I don't think this was thought out much, unless MC or Sys time travel back or resets the original world to before the isekai? I don't know but its a bit of a plot hole if not taken care of.
Currently on ch 129, and in the middle of reading I had a thought, what if Robin trains the Stewardesses to become space ship captains? I mena think about it. the Captain must know the whole spacecraft to understand its capabilities in case of emergencies, in charge of the safety of the crew and passengers if any, give concise instructions when needed and has great leadership qualities. While are stewardesses must know the aircraft to know its capabilities to an extent in case of emergencies, in charge of the safety of passengers in emergencies, and must be able to give concise instructions in emergencies for the safety of the passengers. Of course I'm not a steward myself so this might not be the whole picture nut just my understanding of them from being on many flights. All it would take would be to train the stewardesses in leadership and they would be all set to start training in being the space craft captain, at least in my opinion. Also it would be interesting as a buildup for a subplot.
The "He", "She", "Him", "Her" are all reversed in relation to the characters. Arya keeps referring to himself as she and her while all females characters are referred to as he or him. Please get an editor before posting as this novel is interesting but the simple errors can cause you to irritate your readers to leave. I hope you continue this novel further.
I'm back after a year and re-read the whole thing. Ah, still as good as I remembered, I always come back to this novel. I still feel sad that, for some reason, the author can't continue this novel. Most likely, due to CCP ban or something similar towards him.